| "Just one chance on a warm summer night" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: LoveIsChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 07:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! :D
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Reviewed By: darken by2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i loveed your fanic it was geart it scared me and i was omg that DID NOT JUST HAPPEN! it was geart xD
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Reviewed By: my_perversities On: September 29, 2008 13:22 CDT
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You've done it again, totally blew my socks off!! This shit rocks totally smut-tastic.
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Reviewed By: NaVaJo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 23:30 CDT
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damn it seems to get better each time i read it...please write more :'(
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Reviewed By: emykins On: May 09, 2008 23:22 CDT
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XD *hug*
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Reviewed By: Cat Happy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holly shit that was damn good you cna do a sean like that any time you want. damn good. one thing though please make it longer i like this way to much thanks
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Reviewed By: NaVaJo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 22:42 CDT
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wow...interesting turn of events, you should really think about writing more to this story.
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Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2008 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so, like, to be honost, i stopped reading at frirst, then when i was reading another story that i wasn't into i was like, hm, why don't i go back and read this one, and i'm glad i did, this was great!
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Title: ash
Reviewed By: i love kouga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is amizing. i loved it u shoud write more like these. again i love i and ur other stories. ash
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 18:47 CDT
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Oh, Max! (sound like someone you know?) That was so wonderful! May I beg you to write more! Poor Tristan didn't know what hit him. That had to be a bit traumatic. I'm sure that Hayden will earn forgiveness. Not sure about Mitch though. He certainly wasn't very considerate of Tristan's feelings, or even Hayden's, for that matter. I think Mitch needs some punishment. The details of sensation were wonderfully written. I would love to learn more, from a male's POV, of the sensations during sex. I had wondered how they would compare to those of a female. So many of us are female writers and we have so little input from males. Thanks for writing that. I'm glad that none of the actions involved pain. I had planned on something using the gag devices, the tubular one, and I had no idea that they already existed! I do know that there are gag balls with punctures in them though. Eh, I've got so many hentai scenes running around in my head all the time. Anyway, loved it! Do it again! ^_^ Snow
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