Reviewed By: Irvin Z. Martinez On: May 28, 2008 22:37 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: Once again you prove to have quite the imaginative streak when it comes to angst stories. I personally am only glad that Lance remained alive and while I will not call this story enjoyable per say is simply because I really disliked the final scene in which everyone was killed. I would have preferred that only Paul get killed. So in other words....you are an excellent writer with phenomenal skills....I just didn't like your story this time around.
Reviewed By: Irvin Z. Martinez On: May 28, 2008 22:29 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: I do have to say that this latest chapter was quite surprising. I especially liked that twist with Red being the one controlling the Pokemon. Still the fact that Lance died and was actually abused by Paul no less does leave a rather disturbing feeling within me. But if that was the affect your were going for....well you managed it.
