Reviewed By: randall On: October 12, 2008 20:45 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: a beautiful story . it moved me almost to tears and the ending was fantastic. however thew grammar does need a little work and some spelling errors were there too, other wise a very good job