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| "The Adjustments" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Title: Grrrrreeeat!
Reviewed By: CircleKV0012 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2008 18:29 CDT
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Nice ending. I want you to deal with the other gundam pilots reactions and the pregency. Like how they handle each stage of the pregnecy and hiding out and such. Please have the sequel out soon! I love your work!
| Title: ch4
Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2008 07:44 CDT
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Oh yummy! This chapter was filled with lemony goodness. It was rather cute how worried Wufei was about hurting Heero. I'm glad Sally ripped him a new one. Now that he's come to terms with this unexpected twist in their lives, he seems to be thinking about some things Heero had overlooked. They need to go house-hunting, job-hunting, pick out names, buy furniture, and keep a low profile throughout. Heh, I wonder how much Heero will start to show before Sally removes the baby into the artificial womb? Will he have to go in drag so to avoid unwanted attention. Hehe. That's a fun image. I wonder how the rest of the pilots will really take it (your omake was hilarious). (Sharine too!)It's fun to imagine the looks on the faces of the select few who will be told. I also wonder how they'll deal with fatherhood. It occurs to me that those who want one sex of a child, usually end up with the other. Oh there are just so many possibilities bubbling up in my head! (And I'm supposed to be the fangirl who doesn't like mpreg. I guess I can like anything that is well written:) This was delightful and I'm thoroughly hooked. Thank you very much for writing! --jess, your overly speculative fangirl.
| Title: Nice
Reviewed By: CircleKV0012 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 22:33 CDT
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Nice job! And I think you are doing a good job keeping the guys as guys and not as you said "chicks with dicks". I think Heero is taking this amazingly well but if you think about it, he probably would. I wish you woudl do a full out male pregency, I know you can do it. But if you don't want to thats fine. But with this story, it's like you are dangling the idea of the story in front to my face like candy then saying no actually I won't be giveing you that story/candy. But its ok I will be strong and survive the losss. Nice job again with the chapter. So sex seen next chapter? eh?
| Title: jamc79
Reviewed By: jamc79 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 12:23 CDT
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It is nice to read a Gundam Wing Mpreg story without the characters being ooc. At least not in the sense of how they might have grown up after the war. Keep writing....I can't wait to read what happens next in their lives. And rest assured, so far it's not a "chicks with dicks" story. :)
| Title: ch3
Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 12:13 CDT
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Heh, It's probably a good thing that Heero was the one who set off the bomb. He's not a Preventer so Une has no real power over what he does and doesn't do. The bit with Jr. The Coward was rather amusing too. As for Heero and Wufei's relationship, I'm glad that Wufei finally admitted that he's been an ass. They've likely got a long way to go, but at least they're talking about it. Both have perfectly understandable and legitimate worries. After all, it's not every day that you find out your new boyfriend is pregnant. It makes it so much worse that their relationship is still so new. The uncertainties and insecurities are all still there, and this situation dug them all up. Of course, one awkward conversation over dinner and a bit of 'I'm sorry I was an ass' sex isn't going to solve everything. But it is a start. I look forward to seeing how you'll wrap up this snippet of their lives. (And to hopefully seeing more of them in the future. You've got me speculating wildly with that sneaky teaser about Sharine!) Thank you very much for writing! --jess, your totally engrossed fangirl.
| Title: Nice
Reviewed By: CircleKV0012 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 20:36 CDT
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I love good male pregency stories, they are just so cute. And with Heero and Wufei, the tow stiffest guys ever, even cuter. I am still seeing how you are going to write a whole pregencay story in 4 chapters. I mean they are not even ridiculously long chapters. Is this just a segway into a another story or what? I mean you can not cover like 9 months in 2 chapters. Or raising a child for that matter. But I really like the story so far! Please udpate soon! Great job!
| Title: ch2
Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 08:49 CDT
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I'm definitely enjoying Heero's POV here. Wufei was hovering in that wonderful haze of uncertainty and angst in the first story and now Heero is experiencing something quite similar. Rather fitting. Although Wufei is certainly being an ass, I suppose it is understandable. Unexpected pregnancy is a hard thing to deal with... Mpreg is always unexpected and exponentially harder to deal with. Even so, Wufei has some explaining to do. Cutting off communication is never interpreted well by the other person. His worry over Heero getting hurt has gone a long way towards forgiveness from me. Of course, they have to get this business with the exploding building out of the way first. (And thanks for the bit with Sharine. I still think Heero'd probably like her if he wasn't so jealous:) I'm curious to see how things work out, both with Heero and Wufei and the bomb threat! Thanks for writing! --jess, your overly enthusiastic fangirl.
| Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 05:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
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I cannot believe I am commenting on an mpreg story. I cannot believe you are *writing* said mpreg story. Even more disconcertingly - it is even making sense. Not a lot of it, mind you, but just enough for suspension of disbelief. It helps that the prequel laid a lot of ground work for the out-of-the-norm humanity, both the normal unnormals (Quatre's families) and the unnormal unnormals. (read: Heero) My personal mantra for this story will be, "It is 500 years in the future and he was genetically enhanced, just smile and nod."
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 16:16 CDT
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G Gundam, HATE!!! GIVE ME GUNS< LET ME KILL THE FUCKERS WHO CREATED THAT HORRIBLE SHIT! *gets restrained by the nice men in white coats, continues to yell* Screw the issues with feeling like being abandoned, whatabout Wufei, how the hell does he actually feel about this, and what is the real issue he's facing? FESS UP ALREADY *gets a shot in teh arm by one of the doctors* Oh, feeling sleepy, writ smore shoon, jah neh *snores*
| Title: ch1
Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 08:33 CDT
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I'm always a little leery about mpreg, but your reasoning seems pretty sound. I'm sure you'll managed to hook me on this one as much as I was hooked on The Dance. I can't wait to hear what Sally has to say to Wufei. I'd like to have a few words with him too, heh. I'm also wondering if Wufei (ex?) partner Sharine might make a cameo appearance. I rather liked her (eventually) and I'm sure she'll have words to say to Wu too... If she finds out, that is. Oh this should be fun! Thank you for writing! --jess, your slightly rabid fangirl.
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