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| "Erosion" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: hobbes221 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 09:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm speachless, outstanding work. I'm sadden by this but in a good way as odd as that sounds. You really did a number on that ending, I kept up hope for a nice happy ending (always do no matter what the fic is listed as) but had a feeling that it was just not to be with some of the things that happened throughout the fic. However this does prove that sometimes survival is not required for victory. And on that note right at the end there just as Naraku realizes that something is wrong I can picture Inuyasha and the rest of them flipping Naruku the bird. Oh by the way Inuyasha and Kagome definitely get the 'Semper Fidelis' award after this, especially when Kagome forgave him and told him that she loved him at the end, it brought tears to my eyes. And with that I leave you with my last thought. - My review looks pretty simple after having a one posted by SplendentGoddess, oh well what can you do.
| Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 01:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can honestly say this is the best fanfic i've ever read. It was a theme displayed in the anime several times but rarely used in the fanfic kingdom(at least to my knowkledge). it took me 3 days to finish-in between studying for 3 AP tests, but i am so glad i did. The ending was absolutely wonderful: everyone ended up together and in peace while naraku was finally destroyed and in a totally novel way. I know a lot of hard work was put into this story and you and your betas probably need a break, but im positively ecstatic about any futre works you do. Again i would just like to commend you on you work. BRAVO!!!! ^_^!
| Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 04:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this very much. It was powerful and sad, so very sad. I can't think of anything else to say because I'm so drained from reading. I can only hope for a better ending in the manga I guess. I'm going to see what else you might have to read.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 09:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa...this is, by far, the most powerful fic I've read in a long time. I loved all the imagery, especially the various things that didn't quite "fit"...which then of course made perfect sense when you consider that everything was conjured up from his own head. So involved with this story was I, that I completely lost track of time - ironic when you consider Inuyasha's obsession with clocks - and ended up going to bed at 4am when I needed to get up at 7am. *shrugs* It was worth it. It was such a unique plot. I especially loved how bits and pieces of the "real" world were trying to show themselves in his "nightmares"...not to mention that TV show that was perpetually the only thing on TV. I loved how, although there was character death and torture involved, it wasn't really that angst, because it was apparent that their souls were still alive and fighting the greater battle. A fact that was also emphasized to Inuyasha in his dream-world, Kagome would always be with him. Thanks to her assistance with Byakuya's illusion, it really was as if dream-Kagome was the real Kagome, as she bore witness to everything Inuyasha lived, staying with him just like she vowed she would, and in the end they were still successful in a manner of perspective. Though they left the world of the living, it's clear their souls are now together for eternity, youthful and carefree, and at the same time, they were able to foil Naraku's plans by leaving a speck of light in the jewel. I also loved how you didn't go into any detail beyond that, leaving exactly what the jewel does to twist Naraku's wish up to the reader's imagination. It's enough to know that he'll get his, and I think you ended the story in the perfect spot. All in all, I think "perfect" is the perfect word to describe this fic.
| Reviewed By: Akuneko On: May 08, 2008 00:05 CDT
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Well now I feel stupid, cause I didn't realize her closing date for fics was Apr. 15th, but I swear I will make sure to bookmark this and save it for the next session.
| Reviewed By: Akuneko On: May 08, 2008 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of the most original fan fictions I have ever read. I want to applaud you for your fantastic writing and creativity. If it hasn't been done by the time I finish this review and pop over to LJ, I will nomming this fic for best drama in the Shikon Awards, as I really feel it deserves it.
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