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| "Osaka" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Kagali On: July 22, 2008 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's the same comment for the names. Please the next chapter !!!!! I cann't wait!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: DuosAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is great fic. I'm captivated, truely. The only problem I have is that you've gotten several names wrong. Yuuto should be Yuuko, and if I'm right in believing that you used all four main characters from Legal Drug then Sango should be Saiga and Ritsu should be Rikuo. Of course, I'd understand if I was wrong about the last two. But if they are who I think they are those are the names they have in the manga. Other than that, I think this story is wonderful and I can harldy wait for the next chapter.
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