| "Dark Tournament" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: XanderB On: December 18, 2008 08:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that perhaps you didn't know that Sephiroth and Vincent are also father and son, since you didn't have Trunks against Vegeta for that reason. I am quite thoroughly enjoying the fic though. Keep up the good work and I look forward to future updates.
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Reviewed By: Queen Leo Starblazer of the Chaos Riders On: July 26, 2003 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm.. Well, my poor little original characters started to get pale after I read this and got ideas in my head, but... Wow! Really amazing! It's got to be really difficult to make the characters interact differently after each match's end.. And you probably have to use a cattle prod to get Ku-chan to behave, naughty scanty dresser that he is.. I really like this fic! HEY!!!!! YOU!!! I, as Queen Leo Starblazer of the Chaos Riders, aka, 'Cheeze', Gatekeeper Kat, Yuri of the Blades, and anything (or one) else I have forgotten, DEMAND YOU TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! This is an order from ROYALTY!!!
Thank you for your time. |
Reviewed By: chibivicky On: March 20, 2003 09:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like you fanfic and i can wait to read the other parts. But please if you do a round with Kamui against Vegeta please let Kamui win!!
It's not that i don't like Vegeta. I do like him a lot, but i love Kamui more!
Anyway, keep up the good work :) |
Reviewed By: LadyRayna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic you have an exellant writing style. |
Reviewed By: Dark_Fox On: January 29, 2003 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this fanfiction.net and i am glad to find it here.Plz do Albert and Lloyd next plz. |
Reviewed By: MD On: March 16, 2003 10:11 CST
Comment/Review:
I do enjoy this story, but where is the rest of it. Priorities... just keep em' coming.
I love it. |
Reviewed By: Ganymede10 On: December 28, 2002 12:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you should add Hiei/Kurama pairing too, but for now its great. Continue please! |
Reviewed By: Sansei On: August 18, 2002 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was both suprised and delighted that an author would do this type of fic. I thoroughly enjoyed the current chapters and I will be checking back weekly for updates. It must have taken sometime to write this, things seem to be planned. Another couple that I think that might have been a good addition is Kurama/Hiei from Yu Yu Hakusho. I am not very familar with Final Fantesy, however, I liked the chapter. But once again I have to complament you on the concept at such a large scale and I am looking foward to where this is going and to each battle. l loved how you used different time periods for the characters. Arigato! |
Reviewed By: nikkiel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2002 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD
*IS VERY GLAD YOU'VE UPDATED THIS FIC*
and i find it much more.. angstier when they're all from different time periods too. |
