| "Vodka" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: i see
Reviewed By: downward spiral [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 16:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
so this is the reason my other author fic has only 17 views yours is easier for people to enjoy, i guess i have fallen prey to someone elses victory in fan fiction oh well its a good fic keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: chocolate_jewel21 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha cute [as always] i liked how Bra started crying in the store and Pan's Chichi//Videl like attitude. Poor Trunks haha update:]
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Reviewed By: chocolate_jewel21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm can't wait to read the upcoming chapters it should be interesting to see what two little first graders can make them do. great job!
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Title: HA!
Reviewed By: chocolate_jewel21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it gets better every chapter with you. not much i can say except keep up the great work. hangovers naughty kids i can't wait to read what their punishments are HURRY!! :]
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Reviewed By: chocolate_jewel21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! UPDATE! and it's a T/M ficcie:] woooh. now the damn CLIFFHANGERS!! noooo please please update soon love this cute fic:] drunk teens=pure joy
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Title: continue
Reviewed By: chocolate_jewel21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's cute so far i like it:] i usually don't see these kinds of dbz fics written so well. they are usually extremely random. but this actually holds my attention. i am hoping for a little T/M action, but i won't hold my breath. lol. continue
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