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| "The winds of change" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Interesting!
Reviewed By: Azhwi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2009 02:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love what you've done with the characters. Of course Im curious to see what happens with Grimmjow. Very excited to see the next part!
| Reviewed By: vulgarsonuvabee On: February 11, 2009 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read your story on this site again cause i noticed it wasn't on fanfiction anymore. You must continue this story! Its just amazing on every level! The plot and everything is so origonal! I hope you do update real soon!!!
| Title: Yay, first review^^
Reviewed By: Fried deer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 16:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi, just read the first two chapters of your story. All in all, good fic you've going here:) First some constructive critisism: In the first chapter I was confused when there was a lapse in time, or it was a new scene, since you didn't have any separators between them^^ Otherwise, I really like your writing style; it's interesting and with a fair enough vocabulary. I've added your story to favorites, so I'm looking forward to the next installment^^ Cheers!
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