| "Crossing Barriers" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: AnimeHuntress [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job! I was really excited when I saw this Wing crossover and even more happy when I found an actual story with a good plot! I just wanted you to know that I really am enjoying this story and can't wait for you to update. Your writing style is very unique in fanfiction and very enjoyable. You have easy transitions between the separate points of views and bring everything together in an interesting manner. I truly haven't seen such a good story in a long time and I hope you update soon. I don't have a real clue as to where this fic is headed and I'm enjoying that its unpredictable while having a plot. Thank you! Keep writing. AnimeHuntress
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Reviewed By: Syngi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 22:29 CDT
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I do so like the pace of the mystery and the plots in line. It's really coming together. Something tells me that the chapters to come are going to be intense. Can't wait.
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Reviewed By: Syngi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 23:46 CDT
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Oh My how funny! figures they would find some way to take samples but I feel for poor Dearka. I had wondered when Kira would share his insight into the Shinigami he saw. Can't wait for the next step in the march toward Crimson Dawn's demise and the rise of the Gundams on the other side. Anticipation mounts.
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Reviewed By: Syngi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 21:07 CDT
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The great joining begins! I'm bouncing in my seat in anticipation. This is gonna get good fast and Kira is right in not wanting to see Shinigami.
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Reviewed By: Syngi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 01:41 CDT
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Very good and well worth the wait. I can't wait for them to really see Shinigami in action. The interaction between the two differing pilot groups is good and their action well within reason. This is getting really good and I can't wait to see how soon our wonderous GW boys get into the fray of their friend's lives.
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Reviewed By: Syngi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 10:30 CDT
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AHAHAHAHHAHHHHHHH!!!!! That was a crappy place to end that! I was all ready on a rush from the battle but then you had to stop JUST as they were to meet. Bad writer! Bad! But the story was great!
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Reviewed By: Syngi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 19:43 CDT
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I can all ready see that the boys won't be staying out of any battle that takes place so close to their hidey hole, much less letting school kids be used to ransom. The pirates have no idea what they are about to face and I'm bouncing in my seat.
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Reviewed By: Syngi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 23:03 CDT
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Very coherant and well done. You always know just where to end it so I'm shouting at the screen. I can't wait for them all to meet their counters- I'm sure many are going to be in for a surprise.
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Reviewed By: Syngi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 17:12 CDT
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Well done! And the build up continues...
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Reviewed By: Syngi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2008 16:33 CDT
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While I dont' know alot about gundam seed I can hear the music climaxing to the point of tension. The plot is great and whether I recognize anyone - in my mind's eye I can see them clearly. Hard to imagine the blondes all auburn, though the elf comment on Dor's eyebrows was enough.
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Title: OH my
Reviewed By: Syngi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 10:12 CDT
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I have never seen any one explain things so well. I never gave any thought to whether or not they had been conditioned for anything. This is intense and well thought out. I like your logic and await the next words of wisdom.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Syngi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 18:23 CDT
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*shiver* okay the goose bumps are starting to fade and so is the scream that followed the end of chapter two. This is completely engrossing and totally took my breath away. Don't make me wait too long for the next bits to follow I'm a totally dedicated now.
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