| "Orange Star High School" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jada is Happy! Happy! that you updated...This was a great chapter...You're doing an awesome job...
Keep It Up.
JadaKirin |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: August 13, 2002 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like the fact that you're approaching issues people haven't really gone near in other fics. it's realistic. actually, it kind of reminds me of some of my friends, which is kind of sad now that i think about it.
i think you're doing an excellent job with how you're progressing the story. it's awesome. |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin On: August 13, 2002 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This chapter was really strong...and you're doing a great job of developing everyone...
I have gotta tell ya, I love...having Piccolo in this too...
This is still the most unique story going...
Keep it Up.
Jada |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have been working really hard on this one, I know how it can be...sometime it seems you just can't get them out of your head.
This was par excellence...You continue to develop these characters in ways that I hadn't thought of, and the plot grows nicely complex...
Please don't let Invader Zim keep you too long...
Ja ne!
Jada |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 13:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
keep writing ill keep reviewing!!! |
Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 10:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Intense story...man, a lot of shit is going on, though what is up with frieza? he like went through some kind of metamophasis, i get the feeling shit is gonna hit the fan with him. could you let me know when you update? i might lose track of the fic if you don't really good story, i have really liked it so far. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: August 07, 2002 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wooooooeeeee!!!!!! yay! that latest chap was excellently written! (they all are, by the way) well done!!
who's killing everyone? i thought it was vegeta, but now i'm not so sure... update soon please!!!! |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Despite the setting you manage to keep this interesting...I can not help but wait anxiously for the next chapter.
Jada |
Reviewed By: Sk8nBaBe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 07:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY !
keep writing more !
thanx : ) |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I've read fics before, but this is...wow. You put so much emotion into it! I literally feel what your characters are feeling. You write so well. This is an amazing view on normalities that we see every day. I am so looking forward to the next chapter, and hopefully a lot more after that. Vegeta better get his revenge soon, or I'm going to flame you so bad! j/k ^_^ I hope Bulma will figure out that Vegeta's not gay, and I hope Goku will realize that he didn't kill his brother. This is a fic to be remembered, for sure! |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2002 21:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooh this is new plz write more chappies soon!!! |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2002 09:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi!!
I've never done this rating thing. But I must say... it's very good and original. I hope it continues,'cause I wanna know how Vegeta ends up. Poor Vegeta, it's kinda sad for him. And, is he really gay?? Anyway...I really like this story!! |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2002 06:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I've just got to say, i like this fic and i think you would like mine 'It could only be the teenagers' because...well...yeah, in mine Piccolo is the druggie! Hehe! I'm so cruel! Cool fic! Update! |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm. This is intriguing...and trying...
I can wait for further developments.
Poor Vegeta...I don't think he's out of character (for this story I mean) just confused, ne?
JadaKirin |
Reviewed By: winddancer On: July 29, 2002 12:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update!!! this is getting so good!!!! I almost had a heart attack when Bulma threw away that journal enrty!! I wanted her to read the rest!!!! Did Vegeta kiss Raditz or the other way around! errrrggggg!!!! I have so many questions so pleeeeaaaaase UPDATE!!!!!!!!! |
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