| "Orange Star High School" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 20:28 CDT
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-runs around in circles- good ending, i want to read the sequal too....ah...what's your name on ff.net? cuz i tried this one and couldn't find it...i don't get on mm.org much any more.....but i really want to read the sequal! ~Leaf~ |
Reviewed By: sorceress_sarrkh [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2003 20:35 CDT
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This was very demented, dark, and almost angsty (or maybe it is, i don't really care)Anyways, i loved it completely. Vegeta makes for a pretty cool goth and the androids fit their roles nicely as well. hee,hee, as for gay piccolo... I think i actually liked him and Vegeta together. The other characters too were good, but their personal stories felt almost rushed thru.
And the story felt really abrupt and unfinished too. Like the ending was a cliffhanger or an interlude. But then again, that's probably what the second fic if for, eh? I hope that one has the same feel too and that Vegeta can re-meet everyone else, but even not, this was still really good and a much better high school fic than the usuals.
O, and don't be bothered by me not using the rating system. I have no idea how to properly use that, so i merely give my opinion. |
Reviewed By: AnkukoTenma On: April 27, 2003 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just LOVE IT!!! It is sooooooo oringal and dark and sad,... I LOVE IT!! Well you focused on how it sometimes is in high school now and days (shakes head)but hey if it is dark, there has to be light or what goes up most come down or should it be the other way around. O well I hope you update really really soon I just have to wait and see. |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Vegeta, things just got even more confusing. @_# I know I know! That song is from my fav movie! Donny Darko! It's 'A Mad World' by Gary Jules. ^-^ Cant wait for the next chapter! What will poor Vegeta do. -hugs him- |
Reviewed By: SkittleKicks [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 12:09 CST
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Wow. I've finally picked up on this...a breath of refreshing, yet depressing air. Your writing style is excellent, and a wonderful insight into the turns that life can lead to.
As to your "challenge", it's one of two choices.
1. Donnie Darko? (Think I got that name right.) I seem to remember a song called "Mad World" in there.
2. Rat Race, which is the remake of It's a Mad Mad Mad Mad World.
Both came out in 2001. But, if I have to make one call, I'd say Number 1, because the tone of it fits the story you're telling better. |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2002 14:53 CST
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awesome chapter!!! I'm curious about ow it'll continue!! please update soon! I think it's sad for Vegeta that his stepfather is dying, and they found out about Chi Chi!! I wanna know how it'll go further!!!! |
Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 18:43 CST
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AH! CHICI! -cries- i even feel bad for vejita over his stepfather... -sniffles- but it was a good chappy! i'm glad you finally updated!!!!! -Leaf |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2002 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-falls over- OMG! That was..wow! About time they found out about Chi Chi. Too bad it had to be in this way. Hmmmmmm..I wonder if that letter said basically what I think it said. -twilight zone music- Piccolo and Vegeta are so cute! -collective aws from the assembled group- Too cool. Until the next chapter! -bows and falls over- |
Reviewed By: Sk8nBaBe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON : ) |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 12:21 CDT
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I've read this story I while ago and I just finf out that there were new chapters! Who was actually talking at the end? Goku maybe (just a guess. And is Vegeta Gay or Bi. Well, guess I have to read and finf out!! Please continue! I like this story. Allthough Veg is a Goth. I like it. Some people misjudges Goths, I dunno why. But anywayz...keep up the good work!! |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2002 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chappy Chappy Chappy!!! ^_^ Camera! -lol- That was priceless. OHHHH! I want to know what that last bit at the end was all about! Man I love this story!!! ^-^ Until the next chappy!!! |
Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2002 15:20 CDT
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WHO WAS talking at the end! i wanna know! -cries- good chap though, i love the whole thing with Vejita smiling and Juunana needing a picture...can't wait for more!
-Leaf |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2002 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an awesome chapter. I think it's too cool that others are finally starting to SEE Vegeta, not just a sterotype.
I can't wait to see what happens tween K-man and Juu...
and I personally, (call me hentai) I would love to see a more detailed excursion into the first night between Geta and Piccolo..
You're doing a terrific job...keep it coming!
Jada |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2002 17:42 CDT
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AHHHH! Vegeta and Piccolo, that's one couple that never crossed my mind. Hm, not a bad pairing though. ^-~ Great chapppy!!!! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: August 18, 2002 11:14 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that latest chap was so cute! vegeta fell in love! it's adorible! and i personally would have nothing against a lemon for that chap, either. |
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