| "Orange Star High School" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2002 06:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I've just got to say, i like this fic and i think you would like mine 'It could only be the teenagers' because...well...yeah, in mine Piccolo is the druggie! Hehe! I'm so cruel! Cool fic! Update! |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm. This is intriguing...and trying...
I can wait for further developments.
Poor Vegeta...I don't think he's out of character (for this story I mean) just confused, ne?
JadaKirin |
Reviewed By: winddancer On: July 29, 2002 12:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update!!! this is getting so good!!!! I almost had a heart attack when Bulma threw away that journal enrty!! I wanted her to read the rest!!!! Did Vegeta kiss Raditz or the other way around! errrrggggg!!!! I have so many questions so pleeeeaaaaase UPDATE!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: vin On: July 22, 2002 06:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god damm this is one of the most enjoying and cool fics i have read yet please write more. i just love the way you have presented the characters, so much angst so much drama this is so cool.
once again you must keep writing and soon |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 21, 2002 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh, so i guess vegeta isn't gay. not that it would be a bad thing, i have nothing against yaoi. it's just nice if he's with bulma.
anywho, hope you update soon! |
Reviewed By: Tokumei Kibon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I *LOVE* this fanfic. I am just DYING the read more!! It's really refreshing to read a highschool fic where no one is terribly cliche and are all popular without any problems of their own. I love it!! |
Reviewed By: Terrific! On: July 15, 2002 10:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a terrificly refreshing take on things!!! I am so hooked...please write more...
soon soon soon....gotta have it...: )
Jada |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 15, 2002 09:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is incredibly realistic! i love the idea of vegeta being a goth!!!!! i love gothiness (new word!) anyway, i'm kind of confused by one thing. he probably isn't but is vegeta really gay or not? (plase no, please... whoops, did i write that? heh...)
excellent story!!!! |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 09:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
i so cant wait for Vegeta to go skitzo, i love him when hes angry, and i cant wait until you update soon |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin On: July 09, 2002 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm new to this rating thing...but I truly enjoyed both chapters you have posted...I hope you'll be updating soon...You've laid a lot of heavy groundwork and I'm eager to see it develop.
Jada |
Reviewed By: SS Venus On: July 08, 2002 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is really cool so far. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: July 08, 2002 09:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo,wussup?Nothin much 4 me, anyways great chapter!!!!!!! Me want MORE!!!!!lol. Can't wait 4 da next chappie!!!!Okay,so maybe I'm crazy, but aren't we all these days!Holla @ me!!! |
Reviewed By: veggies_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic. I love the way you twisted it around..it's always the same..Chi is always a loud mouthed bitch at all times..and Vegeta is usually a jock and has all the women drooling over him.This is a really good start. hope to see an update soon. byers |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: July 07, 2002 22:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a great fic,but I don't like da fact that Vegeta's considered a homo in this fic,but it's k00l!lol.&different. Also,u could get more reviews then this at www.fanfiction.net It's not workin yet, but It should be right back on track in a couple of weeks or so..... Can't wait 4 da next chappie!!!!!lol. Yeah.hehe bye. I'm crazy. |
Reviewed By: SheWhoShallNotBeNamed On: July 07, 2002 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn I can't believe no one has reviewed this yet! It's such a breath of fresh air from the typical HS fics floating around these days. The only reason I didn't give a 10 for originality/creativity was because it a high school fic. However you did introduce elements such as homosexuality, homophobia, and drug abuse. While other fics go with the "my son of a bitch boyfriend is fucking that ho in the janitors closet and now I must pursue an egotistcal asshole who is sweet and caring at the same time for my next boyfriend". So thanks for moving away from the norm and I can't wait for the next chapter. |
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