| "Puberty Pan" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: ~*Shippo*~ On: May 30, 2003 00:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, I am ~*Shippo*~ here on this site.
As much as I would like to flame you for your bash on Pan I wont! Okay! I just think your a shitty person espically if your a T/M fan. See your just showing all the T/P fans the reasons more to hate Marron!
I am flaming you for your writing.
It sucked. Sorry, but you CAN NOT write.
It was poor. I couldnt follow the events right. I thought they had left the resturant, but found out that they hadn't. It made no sense.
If you want to write a real bash fic, make sure it is a good one. See you only got 1 P/T flamer review. Did you get your point across? Obviously not. And see you made your self look like a jack as and a shitty writer at the same time! Well! Kudos to you! You acomplished something in your meaningless life!
So your mad at me. I hope
ixLiKexCoWs@hotmail.com
and if you think I might just be a shity writer....well e-mail me and I will send you my stories! I have never been flamed once for my writing.
Well outies.
~*Shippo*~ |
Reviewed By: Victoria On: July 28, 2002 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok,it was funny has hell.My favorite part was when Vegeta talking about leaving Bulma for Pan.
My only complaint is I wish you could of come up with something better then webfeet.Maybe,she was half female and half male or whatever.It was a good fic and I liked it. |
Reviewed By: Pan Brief On: July 17, 2002 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you a 10 on Style of Writing because your style of writing was good *lol*. A 10 on Spelling and Grammar because I didn't see any spelling or grammar mistakes. A 10 on Originality/Creativety because yours was original and because I've never seen an anti-Pan fan fiction. On the enjoyment factor I would actually give you an 8.5 because it was funny, but I didn't like seeing Pan being bashed, though, BUT it was still funny. I can understand why you would write this because almost all T/P fans are evil assholes that bash poor Marron for no reason. I gave you a 9 for Overall Rating because as I said it was funny and it wasn't like some anti-fan fiction where they make the character they hate die like those evil anti-Marronists and you had a reason for writing an anti-fan fiction. Oh yeah, I'm a T/P fan too. You probably already knew that from my name. I don't bash Marron, though because she one of my favorite characters, but I just prefer her with Goten. Anway, good job!
Yours truly,
Pan Brief |
Reviewed By: V6k On: July 10, 2002 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO!! That was hilarious!!!! Down with t/p!!! |
Reviewed By: Bullshitting Penguins [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 16:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
A review from Pan:
What? My role SUCKED! That is NOT how it's supposed to go! You want flames? I'll give you flames! I call on my horde of fans! ATTACK ATTACK!
*Bullshitting Penguins waddle away from the horrible cloud of flying T/P fans on broomsticks*
Bullshitting Penguin B: Hurry Tainted Fire! Waddle! Waddle FASTER!!!!!
Bullshitting Penguin A: I'm waddling as fast as I can, I only have two webbed feet...LIKE PAN!
*flying horde of T/P fan's speed increases*
Bullshitting Penguins: QUICK TO THE BULLSHIT MOBILE!!!! |
