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| "Salvation Holdout Central" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Iyasu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2010 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was simply beautiful. I loved every word, and I especially loved Riku's chapters. Everything flowed together perfectly.
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 12:10 CST
Comment/Review:
I . . . I don't think I have words for this. It was just. . . so raw. We all know that there had to be some reaction that wasn't a reaction to them coming home, that there had to be some adjustment but this . . . wow. . . Amazing.
| Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
By all that is holy . . . . oh wondrous goddess of creativity, you too know of Kingdom Hearts? That idea is frighteningly beautiful . . . . but yes, to the critiquing. . . . . Less is more with you. Each point for Riku's chapter sent a strong chill down my spine, but the ending implication makes me smile. I like, and am amazed, that--no . . . it's probably just a big coincidence. But it still makes me smile that we share similar thoughts. . . . Sora's chapter was difficult to interpret at first, and I had to read the beginning a few times to understand it but, the last line shook me so hard that I started crying as I typed this up. I had to hold back a gag, because . . . I could feel Sora's revulsion for the situation. And the flash of silver in Roxas' memory . . . . once again we seem to be thinking alike, and once again I applaud how beautifully you write. To be able to convey so much information in so few words . . . . breathtaking. . . . . And Kairi's chapter makes for a perfect tri-fecta. I admit because I haven't been able to work much on Kairi's characterization in my stories, not out of loathing, or any silly fangirl-ish such thing, but simply because she just has to wait for time to catch up with her. But what I have worked out for her, I see here in a much more polished form. I knew that she was strong, I knew that she was observant, but . . . . here you have shown me things I didn't even realized I had decided for myself. If this is all you write for KH, it is wonderful. And if you write more, then that will be wonderful too. Thank you, for this was a lovely surprise to find in my inbox today. May you never lose your inspiration. Be well.
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