| "Darkness Before Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic!!!!! Holy cow!!! This is awesome! I'm not, I repeat, am not a AU fan but I've got to tell ya, you're converting me. I'm canon buff to the 10th degree, but this is so original and music you're using kicks ass, I finding myself waiting impatiently for updates. Love the set up and story so far. Hmmm...I think Koga is of the stalker quality in this one. I hope he didn't have anything to do with her fiances accident?? (devilish plot bunny that has taken up residence in my head since reading this) I hope not. So is Inu a hanyou in this??? I know you've hinted a few times about an inner demon but I like to heard it from the horses mouth. *grinning* Keep up the excellent job. I look forward to more updates!!!
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 22:52 EDT
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Many apologies to my reviewers....*hangs head in shame*....I forgot to put the replies from the last chapter at the end of the chapter!!! I will endevor to correct that mistake soon... Until then.... Thank you all for taking the time to read and review this story!! They really do make my day, and give me the incentive to polish these chapters a bit quicker for the beta's to pick over!!! I hope you all enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to hearing from you on what you thought!!
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Title: Darkness Before Dawn
Reviewed By: Uh...Chandy-chan, I guess. lol On: July 20, 2008 06:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew, you finally took off that "no anonymous review" features so now I can tell you that I am so enthralled by your writing. It has been a thrill and a pleasure to work with you on this and I must say that I am grateful to have the inside scoop, or I'd be ready to strangle you with a neat little row of commas. lol Thank you for sharing your talent and putting a bright little shining star among some of the darker and dreary fanfics. *smile* You can't no tag backs...that's not fair. lol
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Title: FROM DEEP BELOW
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 03:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FROM DEEP BELOW THIS IS A REALLY GREAT STORY SO FAR!!!! WE WERE JUST LOOKING FOR SOMETHING TO READ WHILE KEEPING THE FIRES HOT AND FOUND THIS STORY AND AFTER READING the first 6 CHAPTERS WE HAVE DEEMED IT GOOD ENOUGH TO ALLOW YOU TO BE ADDED TO THE FAVORITES LIST OF THE LORDS OF THE UNDER WORLD!!!! DO NOT TAKE THIS HONOR LIGHTLY.... FOR I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS, WHOSE ONLY PURPOSE IS TO DRIVE SLOW UPDATERS AND SHORT CHAPTER WRITERS BACK TO THE COMPUTER TO UPDATE. They are relentless in there attacks They will bark, growl and nip at your ankles until an Update is posted!!!! After which they will transform Back in to the cute little YORKIES they usually are And want to play with you for a couple of hours Before coming home!!!! .... SO DON;'t MAKE ME WAIT TO LONG FOR AN UPDATE !!! STORY IS REALLY GOOD LOVE THE INTERACTION BETWEEN SANGO AND ,.MIROKU,,,, The story line is excellent, and easy to follow. I thought I would just Let you know how good you are doing!!!! ONLY ONE SMALL FLAME,,, MAYBE IT'S JUST ME BUT THE STORY SEEM'S TO BE MOVING TO FAST???? We will just have to wait and see if our trust in your abilities will be justified... BUT ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" sorry I just Can't seem to stop doing that..... I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS ...
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Title: Darkness Before the Dawn
Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 02:42 EDT
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Once again excellent! I love your Koga, I haven't seen him written in this light before, I can't wait to get to know more of him. Awwww! Your mean for making me wait!! I know the wait will be well worth it! Excellent! Update Soon, Write on! Much Love Fairy Goddess
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Title: Darkness Before the Dawn
Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 21:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! Excellent! The fight between Miroku and Sango was cute, funny and realistic of the the two. Loved it! I really do like your version of the characters. Is Shippo going to be in it? The only thing is, it was way to short only because I enjoyed it so much and didn't want to put it down, you took too long to update, but I can forgive you, it was very well worth the wait! I know Kikyou is going to really start some trouble. I can't wait to learn about Inuyashia's past. Man I turly hate the band fics but yours is awesome and unique! You should be very proud of this piece. Until next update write on! Oh, are there going to be anyother characters playing a part in this? Ohhhh! I can't wait! Until next time. Much Love Fairy Goddess
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 19:44 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice update. I like the little bit of Kagome's history we were fed with her talk to the ghost of her past. It whetted my appetite for more. Inuyasha's reaction to her singing was also great and I thought her messing up at first then getting into it was true to life. Most people who haven't sung in front of people for a while would do the same thing. It will be interesting to see how Inuyasha fights for supremacy in Kagome's life against a ghost, it was Kagome that fought against a ghost that was returned to life in the original. I am looking forward to seeing how you deal with the twist.
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Title: Darkness Before Dawn
Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 17:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beyond my expectations! I haven't read an Inuyashia band fic that I liked, that's until yours. I've tried to avoid them but I am definately gald I read yours! I truly like Shiro I can't wait to learn more about their relationship. Is Inuyashia broken because of Kikyo? It has to be something deeper than that shallow, uppity... well, I don't like Kikyo much, no offense to those who do. Oh man I can't wait until Kikyo meets Kagome. I know she didn't take it seriously that she was.. dismissed from the band. I can't wait for your updates! Much Love Fairy Goddess
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 15:08 EDT
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Very nice, I could picture what was going on really well, you really captured the emotion of the piece. I appreciate that you put the song title & artist at the top. That way, sort of like a soundtrack, we can listen to the song as we read about Kagome singing it... just another layer of storytelling to help get your emotion across :) Very nice, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 11:15 EDT
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This is a really good beginning, I'm interested to see where this goes. I'm usually wary of AU fics, but this one has really managed to keep my attention so far. I'm really interested to find out what demons Kagome has lurking in her past.
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Reviewed By: theprophet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 14:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, definitely one of the cream of the crop fanfics and honestly one of the best beginnings I've read...can't wait to read more
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Title: Darkness before Dawn
Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 22:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect! The only wish I have is for longer chapters, but you must have your reasons. I don't know what to say but when is the next update? You should be very proud of this story, it's unique and holds interest, I really want to get to know the characters better. I can't wait for more. Much Love Fairy Goddess
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 19:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This seems like it is going to be a cute story, I am curious where you are going to take it.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 19:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't resist leaving a review here, too. this story is just so good. you have a polished, sophisticated style in this story that i love. i love stories that make me feel, and this one has such strong emotions it could make a rock feel. by the end of the chapter, i was just a quivering mass of emotions. well done!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 08:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
she should really start to get her body temperature up... REALLY quickly... (but done slowly.. otherwise it could shock the system) GREAT story!!!!
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