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| "Darkness Before Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: LK On: October 30, 2012 23:53 EDT
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I really like this story. Its beautiful written with a wonderful story line. I love the character development as well. I would love to read more! | Title: Back from the dead!!
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2009 19:45 EDT
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Hurray!! She was not dead, the story was not dead, and we even get a chapter!! And what a chapter!!! *** That was AWESOME!! I love how Kag & Inu interact with each other!! He is being so sweet and tender, so considerate of her pain and her heart!! You can't help but fall in love with the guy!! *** +++ *** Now I really, really hope you will not update in 6 or even 5 months!! That's too long to remember what happened last!! I love this story and can't hardly wait until the next chapter is up!! So PLEASE!! PRETTY PLEASE!! Update soon!!
| Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 21:49 EDT
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Gahhhh *bouncebouncebounce* I hope you haven't forgotten about this fic! It's been quite a while *bites nails* and all the fics I love seem to get dropped...
| Reviewed By: blackberry [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 09:04 EST
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Congratulations catbaker-your story has been nominated at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008: Darkness Before Dawn, for Best Alternate Reality/Universe and Best Songfic/Poemfic This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! Blackberry
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 02:46 EST
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the September 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the September 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction Dec08/ ~ Inuyashloverr & KnittingKnots Owners of the Feudal Association
| Title: OMG!!!!
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2008 01:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! I FOUND YOU AGAIN,,,, AAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGG M M MUST BE OUT TO GET ME!!!! I THOUGHT EVERYBODY WAS SHOPPING OR CELEBRATING BECAUSE ALL MY UPDATE NOTIFIERS STOPPED COMING IN.... BUT IT SEEMS THEY DELETED ALL MY FAVORITES LIST NOW I HAVE TO PLAY CATCH UP!!!! ISN'T LIFE WONDERFUL???? ANYWAY GREAT CHAPTERS!!!! I CAN'T BELIVE HOW GOOD THIS STORY IS GETTING KAGOME REALLY BLEW EVERYBODY AWAY WITH HER PERFORMANCE!!!! WHAT DOES KIKIBITCH HAVE PLANED???? WHERE WAS KOGA I WAS LOOKING TO SEE SOME FUR FLY!!!!LOL ;} WHAT WILL HAPPEN???? ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" sorry I just Can't seem to stop doing that..... I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS ^-^
| Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2008 15:22 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not surprised they won nor am I surprised that Kagome views herself as the weakest link while she in not in reality. I loved Kikyo's reaction to the announcement, she was so sure that she would be in the winning group, and it was her old band, that she just automatically started for the stage. That is going to cause problems for them later I suspect. Inuyasha's assurances to Kagome was perfect. That was a great choice for the encore song too. It could be taken so many ways to all the characters. I am looking forward to see what comes next.
| Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 15:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! Very little to say after reading all the chapters after stumbling upon your story! What an amazing ride!! Your imagination and way to describe everything has leaved me in complete awe! This story now will be part of my favorites and I truly look forward to read the rest of your story!! Please tell me that you won't do what many writers do and leave it forgotten and never finish it!! It really is wonderful, and it deserves a lot more praise that what you got!! I am really surprised that people have been so stingy with their reviews, I admit I don't do it often enough, but I do try to let my favorite writers that they really got my heart pumping with their writing! You have a great gift!! Please don't abandon your writing and continue to nourish it!! You are really good at this, and should be proud of letting others see your talent!! Take a page out of your own character, and see that you really have talent, and you need to cherish and nurture it to let it grow!! I am going to say what every one else says, but I hope that it will mean something if someone else also says it, adding a bit more weight to the overall sentiment: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I will be waiting eagerly for your update and I promise to be a loyal fan!! Happy Holidays and may the plot bunnies reproduce and help you create more and more pages for us!!
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 13:10 EST
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Title: Just A Weird Parallel
Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 15:39 EST
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I know it sounds dumb, but it put a smile on my face and wanted to share - I was re-reading through this today and got to the scene where InuYasha is trying to convince Kagome to go with him, audition, etc. in Chapter 2... playing the piano and stuff... makes me visualize Disney's Peter Pan, the scene where Captain Hook is sweet-talking Tinkerbell into sharing where Pan is... -_-;; If I had artistic skills, I'd freakin' draw it...
| Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 02:07 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great description of the performance from the band. I really loved the confrontation with Kikyou before they performed. It should be interesting to see her reaction to the performance. Kouga's reaction should be interesting too. Why do I suspect who that new client is? Good song choice too, it fit very well in with the story and the atmosphere the band was portraying. I loved that Kagome was nervous before the performance since she was such a pro before. I can't wait to see what happens next and good luck with the voting.
| Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 22:15 EST
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This is fantastic! It's great, the connection that Kagome and InuYasha seem to share... and both are aware of it. There were a few typos here and there that I caught as I read through everything today... I'm at work, so I didn't have a chance to take note of them right now. I hate to waste a review on them, but I'm nit-picky, so when I get home, I'll leave a review with the few here and there. Good luck at IYFG!
| Title: tsumibukai tenshi
Reviewed By: tsumibukai tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 23:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll be honest with you. I really enjoyed reading your story; however, I know that I must have passed over it many times previously due to its summary. In fact, the only reason I began reading it this time was because it said you changed the rating to get more reviews. I just had to know what was so off about the story that you had to do such a thing. And, as it turns out, I don't think there's anything wrong with your work. I find that it's quite captivating for an alternate universe piece, and that Kagome's tragic past really draws you into the story. I think that if you altered your summary of the story a bit then you would have more of your desired reviewers. It's worth a shot, in my opinion, to grasp the reader's attention with the summary instead of keeping it as is to continue to be passed over. Best of luck with that. I'll be looking forward to your next update.
| Title: NICE UPDATE
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SORRY THIS WILL BE A LITTLE SHORT!!!! NICE UPDATE, I TAKE BACK WHAT I SAID ABOUT STORY MOVING TO FAST,,,, THE STORY IS MERELY DEVELOPING RATHER FAST!!!! LOVE IT WHEN THE FUR FLY'S AND THE ONE WHO WINS IS KAGOME.... LOL YES SHE HAS SOME HEAVY PROBLEMS !!!! WHAT WILL HAPPEN???? BUT ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" sorry I just Can't seem to stop doing that..... I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS ^-^
| Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 20:09 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good confrontation between Kouga and Inuyasha. They both want what THEY think is in Kagome's best interest. It was also good to see Kagome confront them both about their attitudes and get them to back down. The references to wolves and dogs was hilarious, are you sure they aren't demons in disguise and trying to break the others cover while preserving their own? I am looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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