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| "Darkness Before Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 19:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't resist leaving a review here, too. this story is just so good. you have a polished, sophisticated style in this story that i love. i love stories that make me feel, and this one has such strong emotions it could make a rock feel. by the end of the chapter, i was just a quivering mass of emotions. well done!
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 08:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
she should really start to get her body temperature up... REALLY quickly... (but done slowly.. otherwise it could shock the system) GREAT story!!!!
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