Reviewed By: Haru-ness [not logged in[ On: June 01, 2008 20:19 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: :D Hello~ Nice ficcie you have here! Was quite an enjoyable read and hope you update soon~ A few grammar problems over the three chapters but nothing big. Some things were a bit cliche and Mary Sue for my liking but I'll get over it ^-^ Update sooon!