| "Born Again" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: DancingBladesOfDeath [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your second chapter was very confusing, but Im assuming it will get easier as the story progresses. I got lost a couple of times with the spelling but other then that it was pretty good. |
Reviewed By: DancingBladesOfDeath [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the prologue, although I never read the unrevised one. I did feel some sadness, but since I dont really have a feel of the characters yet, it didn't bother me that much. I do want to find out out where she dissapeared off to though. |
