| "In the Dark of the Night" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: eemmaap [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 18:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg, this story seems to be really good! It's the first one ever with satoshi and dark that I've read. And ya'know what? I LOVE THAT PAIRING! :D I really hope you will continue with iiiiiit! :D
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Reviewed By: firekitten777 On: May 27, 2009 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I not a big fan of the dark/satoshi pairing because I don't see the logic behind it. But as long as Dai is the one fixing satoshi I guess its ok if dark breaks him a little. see when satoshi is going to kill him self its to save daisuke not dark so I think the one to put the pieces together should be daisuke. I like your style by the way.
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Reviewed By: QueenFool [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story itself, the only wrong thing was that it needs seperate paragraphs. It's heard to reead like that. But the story is beautiful!!!
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