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| "Compassion" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: hynkkel On: September 05, 2010 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
crazy story, but it also follows the rule in fiction that rape is alright as long as the girl feels good. i just dont see how maya was unable to overcome shinji small as he is. the contraceptive ploy is pretty obvious, if shinji gets her pregnant then he will have another reason to fight. i just wonder if maya is going to handle this publicly or privately? and of course as soon as they find out, and they will, how are rei and asuka going to take it? very interesting and now awaiting the next chapter.
| Title: Lord of Nothing
Reviewed By: Anon#6633 On: June 13, 2008 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I mean... just wow. Shinji is screwed up and I can't say I blame him for what he did, but I won't condone it. The one I'm worried about is poor Maya. I always thought she was such an underused character in the series. It will be interesting to see how she copes with such a traumatic event. Will she actively try to help Shinji, or will she continue to be his "outlet" to vent his frustrations....
| Reviewed By: Miheran [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 06:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
i found that this story spiked my curiosity, i can't wait for the next chapter
| Reviewed By: dennisud2015 On: May 24, 2008 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Though a bit rough, I think that eventually his actions are going to bite Gendo on the ass, and rather throughly too! I think that all Shinji's touches will eventually come to his defense, especially against Gendo! Oh and When Unit-01(Yui) sees what's happening...
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