| "Cavern Craze" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru'sPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2011 20:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
You need to finish this!!! It is really really good!!! |
Reviewed By: Rocks [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 04:01 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To bad there is not more. I would love to have read the continuation of this story. Let me know if you ever update this.
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Title: Hi!!!
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 15:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super fic!!! please continue xD I really love when Sesshomaru and Inuyasha are in a lemon with Kagome xD
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Reviewed By: froggi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 15:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Please, update!!
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Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 00:19 EDT
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can't wait to read more of your story ,,I enjoyed reading it and it is getting interesting by the minute..Hope to see more soon
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Reviewed By: SleepySango [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 03:38 EDT
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Oh gods, the fangirl Japanese, it burns... Why do you use it? I will never understand the appeal. Either write in Japanese, with kana and kanji, situationally correct word choice, contractions, colloquialisms, and all that other good stuff, or write in English. Don't mutilate two languages at once, okay? Maybe the fic would be good if you ditched the fangirl Japanese, but I can't muck through it. I don't understand why you think "Urusai, damare!" is intrinsically superior to "You're annoying, shut up!" No language is superior to any other language, but other than established loan words like "kimono" and "sushi," you shouldn't screw around with two of them at once.
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Reviewed By: iloveprettysilverhair [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 14:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful. I can't wait for the next update to this story; it's sexy, fun, and you do such a wonderful job on the characters! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so good, i love Iun/Kag/Sess stories. continue soon.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 08:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg im suprised that not much people have commented.. this is MAD!! and i love it ^^ lime with Sesshy... we need one with Inuyasha now ^^ soo gonna wait for more ^^
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Title: Cavern Kraze
Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 02:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read a story like this before! Congradulations on a job well done! I am so glad I chose to read your story. I love the brothers bickering, and the way Kagome is handling the two brothers very well, lucky girl. I like how your Sesshy sulks a little. It's a cute story and makes you want to read more. I can't wait to learn what happens next, to see how it all turns our, still I say some girls have all the luck, two fine inu's fighting over her. I hope they don't kill eachother. Again, congradulations on an excellent story. Update soon as you can I can't wait to read more. Much Love Fairy Goddess
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Reviewed By: Ajna On: May 25, 2008 20:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you are doing a really great job with this story. It is really entertaining and I hope to read the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 17:56 EDT
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update soon. i want to find out how each of the brothers deal with their feeling for kagome, especially sesshomaru.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 19:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
this is good so far
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 18:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon. i was reading this story on a single spark. i am glad you are writing again. i look forward to reading some more soon
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