Reviewed By: sara1222 On: June 03, 2008 05:27 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: i love your story although since am a pervert i would like it to be more x rated and explicit i still did not understand the other groups but plz continue