| "The Tale of South Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is increditable! It's so awesome, it's sick! You've got the innocence of brotherly love and bonding, depth, and the edgy promise of passion! It's cool! I can't wait 4 the next chapter! B reading U!
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Reviewed By: YaoiSmutMaster [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is most excellent! The idea and concept are very unique. I really hope you continue this saga.
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well the story line is very good. i think you need a beta reader. so they can fix your grammar mistakes. i am very interested on how this will turn out. so please update soon. i will be watching for updates. if you want me as a beta reader please e-mail me. your style of writing is kind of undetailed but i dont mind that. we all have imaginations.
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Reviewed By: dela1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh the poor babies I hope you kill those eivl humans
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very compeling! 2 b honest, I had almost 4gotten about this story. I had 2 go back and reread the prolong, 2 get reaquinted. You're doing great so far. Keep up the good work! B reading U!
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Reviewed By: dela1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
looks good cant wait for more
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice one, I'm looking 4ward 2 the next chapter. B reading U!
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