Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: JD On: August 07, 2008 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading your fic when only the prologue and first three chapters were posted. I wasn't that enthusiastic about the story at that point. I'm usually not that impressed with fics that move to far away from cannon. When I noticed that you have significantly added more chapters, I decided to give it another shot. My opinioned has drastically changed. Your story is awesome! It is very well written and the story idea is creative and original. I understand that this is a hobby that you do in your spare time, but please don't drop this fic. I feel kind of bad for docking you on Spelling & Grammar, but I decided to be honest. My criticism in this regard stems from misused, or more accurately mixing up pronouns (usually he/she, his/hers, and him/her) by using the male form when intending the female and vice versa. Sometimes, as I'm reading along, what's in print, will confuse me for a second until I reread and catch what you meant. Other than that, this is an outstanding story. Please keep it up and give us a great conclusion. -JD
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