| "A Girl Used" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 12:51 CDT
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Aha! *adds to favourites* this looks like a good one, but wait a minute, if this is a modern-ish, society, wouldn't she have rights in a human-demon relationship? Demons can't just up and abduct a woman and force her to marry like that, can they? *grins with interest* I wonder what Inuyasha would think about them, with his mother being human he'd know them and all... but, this shapes up to be one hell of a scene, in either case! I'm certainly looking forward to a new chapter, Emmy!
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 01:35 CDT
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Hilarious story! I'm excited for the next update to see what happens to poor lil Kagome. That girl needs to wise up... and people need to start being honest with her and treating her better. Only she could find herself in these kind of messed up situations.
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Reviewed By: Gin Blossom On: July 25, 2008 22:59 CDT
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Thanks for the author's note; I'm glad that we're on to better things in the next chapter. The situation in this one sucked!;) Great job, though, as always! And I hope Ayame is portrayed as helping Kagome in the next chapter; she doesn't deserve Kouga no matter what!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic.. Koga's version of Kinky is freaky... but I really liked the innocent Inuyasha "Is that it?" I laughed a bunch! I can't wait to find out why Inuyasha left... Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kouga is WAY too funny. And virgin InuYasha is so cute! "Is that it?" I almost choked from all the laughter. I lovesit. :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 01:02 CDT
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Good story so far... keep updating!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eep Koga has lost it!!! and i mean lost it!!! get him Inuyasha!! lol
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Reviewed By: Gin Blossom On: June 13, 2008 22:47 CDT
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I'm so glad for the update, and any other modifications you want to improve your fics with sound wonderful to me!!!! Thanks again for all the work. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and its confrontation.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! I love Kaggie's characterization! True, she's a little out of character but this is an AU, so obviously not everythings going to be the same. Won over by muffins...I would've done the EXACT same thing in her position. And as for Kouga? He's another one whose characterization I like. I can't wait to see how he plans to kidnap Kagome to make her his "baby-making machine". Lol :D ~Amber
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 00:32 CDT
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hmmm im kinda half and half... i shall see with the next chapter..
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Reviewed By: miftygirl On: May 31, 2008 09:57 CDT
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No offence is meant, but Kagome is incredably slutty, ignorant and lacking self respect in this story. Personally, this is a turn off. Too OC.
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Reviewed By: Gin Blossom On: May 30, 2008 23:46 CDT
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I feel like this is all over the place, but I'm still looking forward to the next chapter when Kagome is sober. I also can't wait for Kouga to grow up and actually get with the program.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 20:36 CDT
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I like this. It's funny, especially the 'sex scene' with Kouga. 'Two minutes, that has to be a new record'...I nearly fell of my seat! :D Will be waiting for your next update ~Amber
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