"Wakamezake" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Maianarisa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 21:31 CDT Comment/Review: Whewww *fans out* Very hot. Now, I'll never look sake the same again. XD Maybe for your next fic, you can get our favourite couple doing it at school. I don't think they could last 6 hours at school without screwing each other if they keep it at this rate. XD
| Title: O.O Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 18:14 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You. Are. A. Goddess!!!!!!!!!! I am still in shock. That was one of the best--if not the best IchiRuki lemon I have ever read. And even then if you count the others in my top five, well, four of them belong to you! I don't know how you can do this! I mean, I know how hard it can be to write long lemons but my f*%king GOD!!! This was AMAZING! I know this is going to make me sound like a pervert but to hell with it, in all of your lemons the dialogue, the pre and post coital actions, and everything in between is so perfectly written for Ichigo and Rukia. I absolutely adore how you keep them so much in character while still writing heavenly smut. You are without a doubt a fantastic writer and I will definitely hold you to your promise of more IchiRukia-ness! You ROCK!!!
| Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 13:25 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: That is a hell of a lot of smut. Great job!
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