| "The Cycle's End" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Ophan On: September 04, 2012 18:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update this. It's one of the most interesting takes on the L/DL pairing. |
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Reviewed By: Basil MacVae On: December 10, 2011 03:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been watching this particular fic since you started writing it. Two to three years later, and I keep coming back to it. I've re-read it's previous installments every time, and every time I feel the same enjoyment that I had when I first read them. I don't know if you'll ever get this, but I hope you do. Your writing is beautiful, and it seems a shame to leave a perfectly wonderful story hanging on the cusp of epic like this. Please continue. If you need an editor, or even a medium, I would be more than happy to offer my services. My email is in the title, if you're interested. If nothing else, I hope that things work out on your end. Ciao, bella~ Basil |
Reviewed By: Namelessboy13 On: April 20, 2009 23:17 EDT
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Please hurry and continue this fic I enjoy it very much
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Reviewed By: BPhantom On: January 06, 2009 20:43 EST
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I loved this chapter! It was so good! Good job, on creating new canon. I'm really enjoying it; keep writing!
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Reviewed By: BPhantom On: August 01, 2008 13:44 EDT
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(I'm going to wait for the last chapter or maybe just a major turning point to keep rating, okay?) Whoa! I thought the whole thing about "rising floods" and "islands" was going to be a side story (like the "four swords" anecdote) about the Windwaker. This plot looks to be thickening up nicely! Finally, the shadow god was able to reveal himself to his Kicsi Farkas. ...Side note: Ganondorf is a fool. Wolves kill boars and eat them for lunch. Stupid guy. Wonder what kind of beast the princess is...? Maybe she's not one. Whatever. I personally would like to see her grow some courage and face off Ganondorf on her own. Her light magic might be able to do something. She's never really done anything before... *grumble* That way, she could turn him back into a man, and he could rule beside her...and Link could run off with his god. I like that. But I can't wait to read more. Link's going to have company? yay! Wonder how this adventure is going to turn out? It shoudl be REALLY interesting. And I totally respect that part of you that wants to design everything (albeit out of D&D habit. XD That honestly made me fully understand it). I've helped my brother with that before. He tells me plots, I give him little suggestions...I've even drawn out a couple maps of like 3 regions of a city for him. I had no clue what the other 4 would look like, though, so I couldn't help him out there. Still. This should be an excellent story. Awaiting the next chapter!
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Title: Completed???
Reviewed By: Angel T-chan Nekoi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 21:39 EDT
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Woooww... soo cool the chap! XD I thought Olorun was what..? Immortal but able to bleed? Well, ok I'm not thinking very strait, don't mind me. What exactly could be SO powerful to actually knock Olorun unconscious? Ganon is doing weights...? XDD And did you noticed that your fic appears as 'completed'? It cant' be! There's too much more to happen before it!! XO Update ASAYC!
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Reviewed By: deejayXbrian [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 14:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fgd;lrejt,hyp;lyeht. AMAZING. I love this story. It's TEH SEX. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: deejayXbrian [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 04:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My dear, you have got to be the most amazing writer I've ever read from. I'm hooked to your style and you've inspired me to write again.
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Reviewed By: BPhantom On: July 10, 2008 00:01 EDT
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another good chapter. Keep it up, don't be discouraged! (And in the meantime, I'll read the manga for the games I haven't played. @_@ Just finished Four swords, skipping over 3 chapters. soo... long... I'll finish this before I read all the others. XD Surely!)
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Reviewed By: BPhantom On: July 06, 2008 00:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally. That's all I have to say, really. "Finally". I've been WAITING so long to read more of your story. I love it; your style of writing is an absolute joy to read, and your stor(y)ies are wonderful. I can't wait to see how this one will turn out. I hope it's half as long as you made it out to be, since I will be VERY sad when all of this is over and I'm stuck with reading it over and over again. ...After it's done, rest assured, I'm printing it out and getting it bound. It makes me happy like my favorite books. Not over yet, though! I'm waiting for more. ^_^
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