| "Stage Three" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Demon_Wolf On: June 10, 2010 13:54 CDT
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When I started reading this I could feel Mrs. Higurashi's anger and disgust. I was absolutely sick to my stomach and near tears when I finished reading. It was beautiful. People may look at this review and go, 'Huh? Beautiful? Wtf?' but only the best of stories can make you having feelings toward them. I know I could have used a different word, like awesome, but it was not awesome. Awesome is just that. Awesome. Yes, it can mean stunning, but beautiful can be that as well. Beautiful can be stunning and glorious and dark and dangerous. And a lot of other things. And that is what this story is. Excellent job.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 03:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW That is really harsh but good.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 21:01 CDT
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This was amazing. Really dark but it made the IY characters seem more real. I like it. :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 15:33 CDT
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Enough rage and grief to turn an inanimate object into a youkai, I am confident. Wow. Just wow. So often these things can lose themselves in prurience, but you've shown the character losing herself instead.
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 04:41 CDT
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So beautifully done that it scared me. And it made me feel, like no fic has ever done before. I cried, I hurt, I felt sick to my stomach. All saying that you are a magnificent author. The scariest thing about this fic is that it does show how realistically easy it is for a person to cross that line. The mind is more than willing to lead two different lives to survive, regardless of the morals our souls hold. Kudos to you, my friend! =3
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Reviewed By: pseudohanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 03:14 CDT
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I am so happy that you won. Your shit is hard hitting and to quote Jenerik_Brand...."All good writing will make you sick" I adore this.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 02:16 CDT
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you succeeded in what i think is an author's ultimate goal. you made me feel. you made me feel so many things. i haven;t had time yet to sort them all out. all i know is that happiness wasn't one of them. i can always trust your stories to be an antidote to all the sugary, waffy stories. your writing always carries such a powerful feeling with it. thank you for a masterful story.
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Title: *covers eyes*
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd like to say I'm not surpirsed by how dark this really was, but I was, damn that was pretty f-ing dark. I think I can go on for a long time not reading about her like that. Scary, I hope you won the challenge.
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi(nsi) On: June 02, 2008 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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well, i like that its very dark and angsty...i like that it made me hurt too. i like how you wrote the emotions and the pain...i understand that grief does odd things to people, but omg...that was just crazy. i'm not sure what else to really say about it. :"au!
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 18:32 CDT
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Thuroughly dark and twisted. I can't really say I like it, but I don't *not* like it either...it was an interesting read for sure, I'll leave it at that.
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