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| "Yakuza Rapture" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: madjax36 On: September 11, 2008 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what can I say, it's hot, sexy, deliciously invocative, and it adds a depth to the characters that I sense when reading the manga. It's also quite plausible and that's always a plus for me as a reader (good mind candy). You're use of descriptive words add to the element and course of action.:D I did find some parts of the dialogue a little choppy and a bit OC. I do realize it would be difficult to add that type of racie dialogue and it not be a bit OC - DUH, pillow talk! However, imagining Yankumi as a Dom and Shin as her "toy," priceless. Plus, I have something in common with you, I'm a long time Inuyasha fan, but I love Gokusen manga/anime series and just wish more fanfic writers take the time to really explore various components/plotlines (best place to see a range of stories is on fanfic.net, IMO). Altough, I'm admittally hentai and these two characters - well, if one can write the smut one read from Inuyasha fanfics, why not more of the same for Shinkumi/Gokusen universe? And be just as inventive too. Why not, I say! Otherwise, you get an "A." Well done. Madjax36
| Reviewed By: ActionBitch On: June 27, 2008 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I was looking for a really great Shin/Kumi fic and I'd damn well say I found it! I love that you wrote them both older and this situation totally suited their characters in my opinion. Nice job!
| Reviewed By: puppypal27 On: June 26, 2008 13:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fanfic was smokin' hot!!! I just thought to myself (since I've been reading the Gokusen manga at your suggestion) that you should totally write a threesome one-shot between Yamaguchi Sawada and Shinohara with all the lemon flavored juices only you could bring to it. Think about it k. I only ask because I feel you're up to the challenge for sure. I can almost feel the heat from it if you were to write it. Just a thought. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for "Yakuza Rapture" by the way.
| Reviewed By: meatbun66 On: June 11, 2008 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is definately a very adult fanfic of Shinkumi coupling indeed!
| Reviewed By: holley's holler On: June 03, 2008 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this story was great and kept me extremely wet. Risa is a great friend of mine and I absolutely love her as well. Great story, I immensely enjoy your writing and that you have a great talent. m.holley
| Title: Humbled
Reviewed By: ccwilgar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 07:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for this unique and generous gift. I am truly awed by your talent. I am so excited and very moved by this. I can't seem to get this goofy grin off my face. I honestly don't know what to say; I am overwhelmed. My friend, I am honored. ♥Risa
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