| "An Unseen Love" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 20:53 CDT
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very nice. can't wait for the sequel. i love the ending. write again soon. well done.
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Cutipie389512 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 20:52 CDT
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Glad you enjoyed it review the lemon and whole story please need some pointers to start off the sequel. Glad you like it tho im stariting on another sotry called Reborn you might like it.
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Title: Please?
Reviewed By: DPVS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SEQUEL , SEQUEL ! Yes I am really excited about the sequel! Please make a sequel ! * Runs around barking like a dog for a sequel *
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Title: Response
Reviewed By: Cutipie389512 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 17:35 CDT
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Of course you'll get a back story...........in the sequel that is! sorry about the dissappointment but ive been really busy the seqeul will be MUCH better!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 16:17 CDT
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hmm i would like a bit more of a back story on kagome and how she came to be living as a human in the future instead of as a demon in the past.
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Title: Ahhhhhh
Reviewed By: Cutipie389512 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 18:18 CDT
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Ahhh i live to please!:D yes im mean making them get intimade like that then BAM antoher interruption right? yes im very very evil!! BUT.........soon things are gona get a bit hot between these to so get ready!!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 17:40 CDT
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okay now you are being mean!!! talk bout wanting people to come back for more, with a cliffy like that, they will next want to read the next chapter. update soon!!!
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Title: Very Good
Reviewed By: DPVS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I felt like thinking ( which is a bad thing ) when Kagome saw Sess kissin that other girl , but now I'm thinkin not to think . It's a good story too .
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Title: Next Chapter
Reviewed By: Cutipie389512 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 20:36 CDT
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Yeah i just couldn't bear for them to be apart lol and i know but i couldn't have them doing anything while in a forest now can i? i have a nice good idea of what the atmoshpehere will be like when they....you know
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 19:58 CDT
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i am so glad that sess found her and explained everything. jaken has the worst timing. i can't wait to read about sess reaction to kagome's dress. looking forward to the next chapter. update soon.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 18:40 CDT
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sess got himself in a nice little fix hasn't he? i wonder how he is going to explain everything to kagome. looking for the next chapter. update soon.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 22:36 CDT
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sess now has to say sorry to kagome for something that wasn't his fault. poor dog. plus now he has to watch out for the lords trying to win kagome's affections. this story is getting good. please update soon
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Title: Thanks for the reviews
Reviewed By: Cutipie389512 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 14:34 CDT
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Thanks to all of you who have reviewd im going to do some twisting and turning in this story hope your going to enjoy it as much as i do!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 12:30 CDT
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naughty kagome and rin, making the lords feel the heat!! i love it that the only seeshomaru went after kagome and the other chased after rin. it is pretty bad, that it takes 3 lords to catch one little girl and only one lord to catch kagome. i can't wait for the next chapter, this had definitely caught my interest.
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Title: nice!!
Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
starting to get really good. got a little hot before the scene ended. i loved it. it makes me wonder what you have in mind for the next chapter. update soon.
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