| "Hallowed Be Thy Name" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Roland` On: July 15, 2002 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not a WK fan by any stretch..but it's very descriptive and suprisingly well written. |
Reviewed By: Nadia On: July 11, 2002 12:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I do enjoy your writing style and I find it quite cool that you've put Bradley not in a position of power. The way you portray Farfarello is perfect, in my mind. I can't wait to see more of this. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Nora Neko On: July 09, 2002 02:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm....I liked how you fucked with Brad's mind a little, although I happen to think that guilt is about the last thing that his mind would jump to in that circumstance. Brad would probably go to revenge first, not fear, that is if he showed any sign of caring for the deaths at all. It was a good story though. |
