| "Our Life" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: decemberangel16 On: September 01, 2009 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story. can't wait to read more. pls udate soon.
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Reviewed By: FIRE Tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2009 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a wonderful story. i want to know what happens next. your creativity helps make this story different and interesting. make sure to make it clear when someone is talking because someone might get confused
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Reviewed By: Karina Garcia On: May 08, 2009 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to continue writting and i have a gift for u spread the word the show is continuing in 2010 it wont be long iknow keep the dream alive keep writting
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Title: love the story
Reviewed By: kagome44334 On: March 11, 2009 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story wath happins next
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unfortunately, the spelling and grammar is so bad that the story is hard to read and understand. I couldn't tell who was talking or who they were talk to. But I could tell that the story started off almost exactly like the scene in the anime where little Inuyasha is asking his mom what a half-breed is. My suggestion would be to go to the forums and get a beta reader to help you fix all of these mistakes. And also to bring some more originality to the plot. Link: http://forum.mediaminer.org/index.php?t=msg&goto=1133320&&srch= Beta+Reader#msg_1133320
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