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| "The Last Unicorn" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: Cute!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: December 10, 2008 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
8 on creativity b/c the idea was already made, though extreamly cute! And a 9 on style of writing b/c of the last chapter, I coulden't understand what was going on in 2 scenes: The first being when Quarte is pined by (im going to say the red bull b/c I cant remember the guy's name ^^') before he cries out for Trowa and is feeling something wet? .....Pressure or something? ^^' It wasen't really descriptive and I was left confused, pardon me if im just being stupid :P -------------------- The second was when Quarte had impaled said bull with his horn but he and Trowa were flung back and Trowa felt something heavy had landed on him, but it says Quarte had missed him...? Again if it is just me being tarted, dont mind me! But those were the only 2 parts of the story where I was left thinking "What the hells going on?" By otherwise I greatly enjoyed the fic! Though you could have had alot more fun tormenting Trowa, Muhaha! A lovely story and im looking forward to seeing more of your work, until next time! XD
| Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 08:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was beautiful, very romantic.
| Reviewed By: WacheyP87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 18:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story. It wasn't just sweet, it was romantic. Though I wondered, couldn't you have put the other pilots in there?
| Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 19:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_^ Wow. I've seen the movie. It was kind of slow and yet sad. The creatures were a bit weird but I guess that's fantasy for ya. Although in the movie the unicorn went away... I kind of felt bad for that wizard, -the beautiful girl was gone- ;_; Poor guy. But anyways I like the story, quite a bit side-tracked and yet not too bad. Nice work!!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Nanashi-chick [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 10:57 CST
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That was sweet. |
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