| "Divide and Conquer" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 11:54 CST
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Poor Quat!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 09:46 CST
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Just finished reading the other chaps. Keep going. I have go to find out what happens. Will there be any lemons? Rape? More jock-bashing? I wanna know!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 11:30 CST
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Hey this is really good. keep goin'!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 03:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A TEN baby!!! I'm only on chapter3...*huffs* and now i have to go to work!! This is really interesting and well done!!!
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Title: Please UPDATE
Reviewed By: Masochistic Freya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is extremely well written and I know you havent updated in almost a year, but it is just so good. So if you could update I would be extremely grateful.
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Reviewed By: Alyssa_Anime_Angel On: November 01, 2004 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a very good story and I would really like you to continue it.
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Reviewed By: Weissangel24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to update. Soon. I want more of this story. I do. ^-^ Weissangel24
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Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 08:19 CST
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^_____^ Finally! I've read the new chapter. O.O EH?!!! EVIL Nicholas!!! >_> Damn guy! Poor Quatre. I like the chapter. Quite nicely described and lol... the indirect kissing scene. lol. I like it. Although I sort of like the subtle 3+4 scene even if they really don't feel so and so towards one another yet. Please update soon and keep it up!
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Title: amazing!
Reviewed By: me On: January 13, 2004 00:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastical!!! this is an amazing fic, it keeps u entertained throughout - never a boring moment, and ur sentences flow so perfectly there's never any confusion. i love the situation of the high school, how there are two gangs, i love how you've added so much depth to characters in such a short time! we understand the relationships between wufei-trowa-heero and duo-quatre etc so well we can predict how theyll react to each other, yet you still surprise us while keeping them in character. i LOVE all ur writing u are my favourite author i check for updates and htough I hate it, i totally understand u putting up a chapter 10 months after, i always do it - but its so EVIL! Anyway, I dont think I've ever seen an error or a typo in ur grammer or spelling or anything, and your talent is clear. have you ever read terry goodkind? he keeps the wording and vocab simple yet the stories are so GOOD! thats what you've done, although you do probably have more of a vocab than him. it's just amazing, you always have resolved endings, entertaining stories and you build up suspense and climax so well. This is an AWESOME story and I can't wait for another year to pass so you'll put up another chappie! thankyou soooo much for posting your work!
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Reviewed By: cewo On: December 20, 2003 14:24 CST
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Woohoo!! It's like getting a coupe of early Christmas presents! It's so nice to have you back and updating your fics! Keep 'em coming!
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Reviewed By: Accember On: December 20, 2003 09:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love this story; it's one of the best AU I've ever read. ^.^ You've done an excellent job of portraying the characters and building a very interesting plot. Please don't skip out another 10 months; I'm not quite sure I could handle that... ^^; Again, excellent job!
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Title: Ch 6
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 22:43 CST
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OMG, did I love this chapter. Heero's method of getting Duo to take that antibiotic was certainly attractive (damn, that would sure work for ME). Duo's reaction was great, and I like how Heero took the wind out of his sails with telling Duo he could hit him. Will be interesting to see if Duo takes him up on that offer later on.
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: December 19, 2003 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man that was great, you have got to hurry and update. Please, im dying to know what happens. Hey can this be a 2x5 instead of 1x2? Well, keep up the good work. Chow Babe
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Title: Ch 5
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 22:31 CST
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(checks date of ch. 5)...EVIL! You left it at that point for ten months? I'm almost afraid to read chapter 6 now! Poor Quatre has a combination of good and bad firsts going on for him. I am looking forward to the next chapter, but what will I do after I've read that one?
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Title: Ch 4
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 22:25 CST
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Nice bit of intrigue with exactly what happened between Heero and Craig and the whole "taking him out" incident. I like this strong, smart, savvy Duo.
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