| "Divide and Conquer" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Title: Ch 3
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 22:11 CST
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I like the way you've set up the tension in this. Wow, I was working on writing something that involved a slightly similar situation, except in a completely different direction. It was kinda eerie to see it, seeing as I'd just written mine yesterday, even if they are really nothing alike. Sorry to go way off topic there! Interesting to see the way Heero handled himself after overhearing the Rauders' little discussion. WuFei's confusion regarding Duo is priceless.
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Reviewed By: Ch 2 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 22:00 CST
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Gotta love WuFei's tact. I am fast becoming fond of this story, with the way the situations are handled and how everyone is portrayed.
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Title: Ch 1
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 21:51 CST
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I LOVE AU high school fics, and I really like the way you've introduced Quatre and Duo. Their performance on the basketball court was completely believable, and I think WuFei is in for a few surprises. I also liked the way you had Heero musing over Trowa's preferences. You've done a nice job of giving depth to the characters already.
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story, please write more! Tabiku Iakkin
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Reviewed By: Devina On: December 06, 2003 07:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story, ur not leaving it at this are u? please write another chap i wanna know what happans! good story! greetings a crazed fan XD
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Reviewed By: Anarchy On: November 17, 2003 22:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Horrible spot to leave this please continue at least one chapter more
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Reviewed By: Destiny's Lot [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man and you left it like that!? How could you, you have to save Quat. Please... Looking I'm begging. Please. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 18:36 CDT
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AAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Would you STOP with the cliffhangers! At least, if you're going to cliffhang me, at LEAST update quickly. I mean, really. Sheesh, leaving poor Quatre drowning face down in a tub... Ah, the cruelty. Just unbelieveable. *sniffle* |
Reviewed By: amy_yah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*rolls over and dies of pure joy* I have never seen such a cunning story...well from any other author that is. Brilliant use of settings, personalities, character stereotypes and the storyline is amazing. I really love how this comes together and yet leaves you wondering. Confusing but utterly enjoyable. |
Reviewed By: Na On: February 28, 2003 20:54 CST
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Hope 2 c more of this fic. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat On: February 21, 2003 22:46 CST
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Interest story. G-boys reasonably in character, poor Quatre. At least he won't be raped, right? The others will be there in time to save him. I like the fact that the G-boys don't immediately fall in with each other like most school fics. Duo's a street rat of course he's going to be suspicious of everyone. |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 21:17 CST
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Poor Quatre. I hope they get those people, can't wait to see whats next. :P |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
;_; my gosh, that was one GREAT fic.
The style was great. You really know how to describe your fics ^-^.I like it, the whole way...
I haven't notice any grammar or spelling mistakes so I guess you deserve the 10 there.
Aa... I think this one is quite original and has a cute start for reasons unknown. NICE WORK!!!
Uh... I like angst actually, but when it comes to rape ;_; I'll most likely break down. The story has a good start like I said. I love angst, but not too much.
I hope you'll be sending more of them. SO keep it up!!! |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 06:30 CST
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omg omg omg...u can't just leave it there! There must be more! this is GREAT! I'm a school fic freak, and this is tops! lol. Please, what happens to Quatre? Update asap! |
Reviewed By: Forsaken [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 15:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I loved this chapter. But you left it at a cliffhanger. Sooo evil of you. Guess it makes the next chapter all the more sought out for. Hurry soon with more. |
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