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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 15:42 CDT
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dude, I swear, you want to hve a yusuke/Touya/Jin pairing, or at least a one time thing. Hmmm, woudl be hot though. Anyway, it took me 4 days to read through this and the Naruto prequel, and I got to say, not bad, though they both need updates. Gmen is a good story, and one this anime series director approves of! He commands this story to continue! HYA!
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Title: G-men
Reviewed By: Stupid Computer On: August 26, 2005 08:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!!!!!! It's great!!! Normally I don't like GW YYh crossovers but yours I can't stop reading. But there's no more to read:(!!!It makes me so sad!!!! Just wondering if you are going be updating this story. PLEASE DO!!!!!!!!!! Tora
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Reviewed By: Solanum [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 12:45 CDT
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I've really enjoyed what I've read so far. There's been an obvious progression in your writing skill and style (great improvements). I'm really enjoying your characterizations, and looking forward to further developments. Loved the music video by the way. I saw you'd been updating pretty steadily through January and there's been a little lapse. I was hoping that maybe a review from a fan would encourage the creative juices. I'll be checking back for updates!
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Reviewed By: priscel *whines* On: April 07, 2005 06:43 CDT
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correction that was 35 i've yet to reach 36
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Reviewed By: priscel - On: April 07, 2005 06:42 CDT
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ch.36 - Ohhh man do you do ACTION Well!!!! Oh man oh man and I haven't finished the chapter yet, i have to *whines* go to work!!! No!! *came the cry in agony*
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Reviewed By: priscel--- On: April 07, 2005 00:39 CDT
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ch.33 *responding to author's note* i was wondering what had happen to Kitty Quat. i still don't fully understand why Sally would tell duo all of this. She could have been straightforward and just ask that he and whoever else he was with not attack and run back there for cover. yes, i'm still reading this babay! it's going to take me a while but intend to catch up. i hope you write more soon.
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Title: "please_______, i want some more"
Reviewed By: peerwon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic thus far, i hope you update soon, since it has been almost two months since the last update. how ever i understand rl interference... but update soon?
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Reviewed By: Nicole (Nita) On: February 11, 2005 21:24 CST
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That was a kick ass fanfic! Too bad it is coming to a close while I'm eager to find out how it ends I really had fun reading it.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 18:54 CST
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mid to ending ch31 "Was he so set on his decision that he hadn't even felt Duo watching him? Was he really invisible, even when he didn't want to be?" Man what a tear jerker!! *sniffles* And I'm not crying, I'm NOT *pouts, rubbing eye with the back of her hand* just.. just got something in my eye is all...
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Title: ch31-30
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 18:27 CST
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"I only do it when I start looking like a raccoon otherwise. " LOL "I'm leaving." Dang it I knew there was a reason why Heero sought Duo out and was acting like a sex deprieved cuddle monkey!!! man... i'd feel kinda used, but more confused than anything because Yuy practically set Duo up to be in a happy sated mood in the morning so he could hit him hard with news that he's leaving, so past angry downplayed by funky lovin that night only to be increased and add to the hurt that Duo doesn't admit to Heero... shit that sucks ya know. I say Duo should bop Heero one right in the jaw! ok ok back to reading the chapter...
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Reviewed By: priscel-- On: January 11, 2005 17:23 CST
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i think i love chapter 30... more of that realism, making the characters not just the characters we know and love in g-wing and yuyu -h but tangible, real! *smiles*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 03:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snickers* why is it that the sexy dark-haired nonverbal guys seem to grunt or go 'hn' *snickers* Just finished ch25 and man is duo so cute in the morning. I love how you pay attention to the little things like bed-head, caffine sustance *snickers* and other stuff that make the characters in this baby more viable, real ya know?! And i really wished that Heero would've have listen to Quat and Duo, the stubborn butt *shakes her head in disapproval* And he didn't have the balls to stop Hiei reproach of Zechs and take on his fault in the matter as well. he should have done something even if it was his usual nonverbal grunt of 'Hn' *snickers* Hiei would have understood the meaning. Man i gotta get some zzzs I reeallly reaaaallly love this story!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 22:00 CST
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CH. 19 ENDING LOL a nearly sleepless night with heero and Duo. *snickers*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 21:31 CST
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Stopping abruptly, Quatre's glare cooled just a bit before darkening again as he looked at the staring eyes. "He's pissing me off." "Quatre?!" ..... lOL (half way through 17) Relena is asking way too many questions!!
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Reviewed By: priscel-not in- On: January 05, 2005 02:29 CST
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ch7. LOl what a show Heero gave Duo...
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