| "The Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 08:59 CDT
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are you going to have them go to gundom wing or yyh? if you aarn't would you think about using them? please?
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Reviewed By: jmetz20 On: August 04, 2008 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story!!! Please keep writing and update your story. I want to know what happens! You said other worlds so are you going to just do the Naruto part or continue to other animes afterwards? please update soon!! I'll be watching for updates!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Suzy Q 001 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work. I think that it should be InuYasha and Kagome because InuYasha is just realizing his feelings for Kagome. Also I think that once Rin grows up that you should have Sesshy fall in love with her because Rin is already in love with him.
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Reviewed By: misfits284 On: July 01, 2008 10:06 CDT
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please don't stop writing i like how the story is going and i would like to see what will happen. i like how they are all meeting and i woul;d like to see how the all react to eac other. please put kakashi with kagome couse i think it would be interesting to see how the would come out.
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Reviewed By: Miheran [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 07:06 CDT
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not bad start and i hope to see the next chapter soon. as for the pairings, i would like to see Naruto/Sango, i'm not sure why but this pair keeps poping into mind. keep writing, zam
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 13:01 CDT
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Interesting story, I'm really curious on just where you plan on taking this. I was especially surprised behind the castle popping out of nowhere, but I really loved your use of Genma and Raidou. I luv those two. *eyes sparkle in joy* I'm not really sure who I want paired together yet because I'm not sure just what kind of feeling you're going for with this story so I think I'll hold off on my vote until another chapter or so. Look forward to more.
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Title: arizonasiren
Reviewed By: arizonasiren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start. I vote for Inuyasha and kagome. Looking forward to next update.
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Reviewed By: misfitd284 On: June 08, 2008 09:20 CDT
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i would lik to see kagome and kakashi paired up ther is to many of naruto/ kag, sasuke/ kag, and itachi/ kags but hardly any kakashi andkag
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