| "final fantasy unlimited" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: ??? On: June 14, 2003 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was way to short. Each capter sould be at least four times what you wrote. |
Reviewed By: Jarell Yomomma On: February 13, 2003 17:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Its ok so far but wheres the rest. It wasn't even three pages as it said. I hope u finish it soon enough. |
Reviewed By: Bored On: December 15, 2002 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did you right that? I just wasted half minute of my life. |
Reviewed By: Gage On: November 05, 2002 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please. Take lessons, you little shit! Learn to write half a page. |
Reviewed By: Aequanoctis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your chapters are really too short.
Please check your punctuation and grammar, the lack of both makes the story hard to follow! |
Reviewed By: SailorCallie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2002 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, so far. But, where's the rest of the story? |
