| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2009 21:02 CDT
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Don't suppose an update would be possible for this awesome story, neh? Loved it so far, but I'd love to read more. Continue writing, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 22:23 CST
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Heh, amusing, to say the least. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: WolfSlinx On: November 08, 2008 10:15 CST
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I Love this Fanfic soo much. I've been following everything you write for quite a while now but haven't gotten a chance to review since I don't actually have the internet. This is... AMAZING!! If you stop I think I'll die. (really)
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Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 08:19 CST
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non of the links that you have posted will work...could you please eather repost them or something?
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Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 01:53 CDT
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I must admit, I was wondering what you were up to with having Neville go to the Nott's, but you explained yourself so thats good. ^_^ I absolutely love this story. I love how you've woven together your own version of things and still keep it in place with the cannon, characters included. I'm also glad that you will be mentioning Buckbeak in this story. I always felt that more could be down with him, and was saddened by his attic fate. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: earth-bound phoenix On: November 01, 2008 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. I love the entire idea, very nice, and very well thought out. Your characters are well developed and make a very nice addition to the story line. I also love what you've done with Neville and Theo's characters. I look foreward to reading more about the reactions to Harry's dissappearance in the wizarding world! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 07:24 CDT
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Well the prof did freak because of voldie's soul piece in Drake, afterall. Neh, I mean, who wouldn't in that case, that soul is as dark as they come, so someone will have to remove it I guess. Neh. Continue to update though, will ya? The frequent updates like this have been nice for a change. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 15:28 CDT
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woho!! you finaly updated! that makes me so happy! update ageen soon please!
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Reviewed By: Simon A. Erif On: October 07, 2008 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story and I can't wait to see what happens next. On the critical side: I noticed some typos and grammar mistakes but nothing too bad. Just simple repeated words or messed up letters. Nothing that would stop me from reading tho. Great story. I'm waiting on updates. :)
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 13:01 CDT
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Of course, when you're next update will be is of great interest. So, is an update possible in teh near future? Neh. Update soon, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Silviata [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 21:34 CDT
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I really enjoy where you're going with this! This story is so refreshingly different, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 20:46 CDT
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poor, poor ryan, he should just giveup while he is still in a semi shallow hole...
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 23:47 CDT
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Hmmm, interesting story, and some good points I'd like to borrow, personally. The Blake idea, for being black and white, is something I like a lot, and plan to use for a character name at a later date. Also, the Potters not being old blood riche, is something I'd like to use. I mean, hey, it seemed like James never really used a lot of money at school, at least no more than someone going to a boarding school anyway. Neh. Still, I love the story so far, and I look forward to your next update excitedly. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Roisin On: August 30, 2008 00:59 CDT
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I really like where this is going.... Did you run into writer's block or is it something more personal that has kept you from updating? If it's the latter, hope it gets better, the former... Well, just start writing.. it'll come to you somehow!
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