Reviewed By: Covetousness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2010 08:35 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Great story:D and it'd be fantastic if your language was better, so try harder next time. (: UPDATE PLEASE.
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