| "The love of a Brother" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: WHAT!??!! On: September 13, 2008 02:36 CDT
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There is no third chapter! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
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Title: chap 3???
Reviewed By: KajiKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 04:45 CDT
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WTH happened to chap 3??
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 23:00 CDT
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this is a good story but why does chapter 3 have no words? also you're writing like it's daytime, butt are saying that inuyasha is human. daytime: inuyasha looking at clouds, sees his way to river, hears river, rin sees inuyasha, ect. inuyasha is only human on the new moon so there would be no light out for him to see the clouds, see his way to the river, or for rin to see inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: shurewood On: July 24, 2008 19:44 CDT
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get ur second chapter up here now!!!! or i will hunt you down like an animal!! translation: i love it update soon please.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 03:04 CDT
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this sounds like a good story so far
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