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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yur story is great so far update soon!!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 11:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol! Dalal and Muna remind me of the evil stepsisters from Cinderella! The insults they threw at each other were HILARIOUS! Anyways...great update! I hope to read more soon :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 06:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that sango is helping kagome adjust in the harem... seems that kagome will have trouble coming from the other two concubines... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, and very fluffy. You left me wanting more! I didn't hand out those ten's cuz I was feeling generous either, you deseved them all. Can't wait for the next update, so please make it soon. It's an intresting story, but will it have a solid plot, or not?
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Help your to anything here you want to use." should be "Help yourself to anything here you want to use." GREAT chapter!
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 18:43 EDT
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FABULOUS!!!!! I love this story! when will we meet the other concubines? You could have tons of fun writing those two in! thanks for updating, dont keep us waiting too long!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 14:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha is treating kagome quite nicely... wonder what else is in store for kagome... interesting that sango is in inuyasha's harem... will sango be paired with miroku though?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 21:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 19:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a awesome fic. I can't wait to read more.... is Kikyo gonna be in this fic or not? I'm not really a fan of hers, so I really wouldn't mind of she wasn't.
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 02:37 EDT
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mmmm... nicely done. I can't help but wonder though if Inuyasha won't end up in a situation much like his father's. Married to someone he doesn't want to be with for political reasons, Kikyou comes to mind, but all the while loving his concubine Kagome. I would imagine that it will be hard to raise her station now after he has claimed her as his concubine, had she remained an unclaimed odalisque (virgin servant that lives in a harem) then perhaps that would have been easier. I also couldn't help but notice that they never kissed. I'm guessing that this is because like in many other stories kissing shows a level of emotional involvement that they're not supposed to feel as master and concubine? I eagerly await further updates.
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 22:11 EDT
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its going to be interesting seeing how the miroku and sango relationship is going to form in this story, as well as kagome and inuyasha's
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 15:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story! You're doign a great job and I can't wait for the next update. I like that, unlike most stories, you didn't exaggerate the whole "virgin pain" thing. And you weren't afraid to throw Sango in a bed with InuYasha! Props to you. ;p
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 14:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this story is defintely going on my favorites. It's very original and tastefully written. Update soon! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 10:55 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice lemon here. I like how Inuyasha is so concerned over Kagome's pleasure. Of course Sango and Kagome are going to become friends, but I can't wait to see how the others react to Kagome. It should also be interesting to see if Kagome wins the servants over to liking her after a while. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 07:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhhh this is SOOO good!!!! its weird to see the Characters from InuYasha with other new characters who have middle eastern sounding names (I wouldn't know exactly where they come from, so that probably means my high school education in a very mixed cultured school wasn't very good... (but then again I think a lot of Muslims (and others from the middle east) were in year levels below me .(we had an influx of islanders (native people from the islands of Australia (where I live))) Where did you find your names?? some were very nice (and some are so hard for me to think of how to pronounce (lack of vowels).
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