| "One Big, Happy Family" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: silverstar/songstream On: June 26, 2008 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooo cute!!!! update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 07:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love the plot so far and i reakon it is a good chappie and like the first review you got that said to make longer chapies can u try cause as a writer my self i know its difficult but try and pleaz update soon
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Reviewed By: alesana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this, and I'm interested to see what happens next, it's very original in my opinion. :] I'd love it if your chapters were longer, though as a writer myself I find it difficult to write lengthy chapters sometimes, especially when you're going for the element of surprise- which you achieved very well! I know this is a long review, I hope you don't mind. :]
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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