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Title: oh...
Reviewed By: EZAEL [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2010 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why may i ask do you name your songs after evanescence lol?
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2008 23:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love this chapter, especially the end. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: TragicMoose On: September 19, 2008 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can i say? I'm officially addicted.
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 00:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a mean place to leave off at. Anyway, great job so far. I really like how this story is going, and in my opinion, everyone seems in character. And I love ichiruki. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yes, please update in a few days! I want to know what Ichigo has in mind exactly. And i'm racking my brains trying to guess at a possible stalker . plus, this is essentially the only enjoyable break i get from school. gotta love service hrs, extra activities, and projects. And your engagement party went smoothly, i hope?
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 15:15 CDT
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Of course you should continue this!! Now I feel like I'm reading a suspense novel, except instead of school interrupting me, it's the fact that it's incomplete Please continue this. I would really like to know what happens next. Especially once Ichigo finds out that Rukia is not the type to break down and become emotional.
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Reviewed By: sharangurl On: June 19, 2008 22:39 CDT
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continue! i immediately loved the story after the first paragraph! please continue, i will be waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!
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Title: AH-HA!!!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 08:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
See! I told you that you should come over here! *Squeals in delight* Yay!!! I hope you find mm.org to your liking. :D Anyway, great first chapter, I can already smell the angst and intrigue coming from a mile away. You've got a knack for telling detailed history pretty well and it's no different with this story. Woohoo! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: miaow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 06:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool storyline! keep up the good work!
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