| "Alone In the Dark" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Sam On: July 16, 2002 12:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please update soon!! I've been checking everyday and waiting for you to update. PRETTY PLEASE WITH CHERRIES ON TOP! |
Reviewed By: chibichibikawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 20:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very cool. I'm impressed. Kudos 2 u!!
~*Queenie*~ |
Reviewed By: Sam On: July 12, 2002 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fanfic. Please update soon.
Sam |
Reviewed By: michelle On: July 12, 2002 11:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I AM SORRY BUT HOW AM GOING TO READ IT WHAN I CAN'T GET iN TO IT? |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm.....its pretty good.....but saiya-jin are physically stronger than humans. She could toss that guy off her with one finger. Now if someone way she could'nt use saiya-jin strength or her ki powers I understand but this makes no sense.
Clueless Bura |
Reviewed By: 092 On: July 11, 2002 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a guy...who don't love pan ;) |
Reviewed By: Sam On: July 11, 2002 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy you updated, please write more. I'd love to Know what Pan does with her life and the gierection she's headed in. Please update soon;)
Sam |
Reviewed By: Sam On: July 10, 2002 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually don't read fanfics like this, But after a while I just decided to go ahead and do it. I finally relised what a big mistake I had made by waiting to read your fic. Please add more chapters soon, Thanks alot;)
Sam
P.S congrates on your first fic!! |
Reviewed By: dbzfreak2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 21:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool story!! So what happens next huh? Please continue and put up the next chapter quickly!!
Thanks
dbzfreak2003 |
