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"The Slip" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]

Reviewed By: Rowen Raven On: July 01, 2012 00:01 EDT
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Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10

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This is a very good story, well written and has a good story line, I love Yozak and even more when he gets it going with Gwendal, they obviously have something going. I like the way you addressed his unrequited feelings for Conrart and how strain their friendship becomes after Luthenberg. You should most definitely continue it. Explore more the arrangement between Gwendal and Yozak and maybe develop the on\off thing with Conrart.

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