| "Memories of you" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: LuxKen27 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2008 18:58 EST
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Hi! :) I finally found a stretch of time to stop by and read your big WIP. I must say, it is very engaging! It's also been a pleasure to see your writing grow and evolve from the first chapters. I think the story has great bones, and you're building up the suspense very well! You've also had a great ear for the natural conversation of the characters - I LOL'ed in a few places at all of them, especially Inuyasha on the phone! Priceless! I think your secondary storyline, with Miroku & Sango is also quite compelling ~ I'm glad you're giving them a chance at a starring role in Absolution. You may be Inu/Kag at the core, but you have a good read on the Mir/San relationship as well. I look forward to seeing where you take this storyline! If, upon completion, you decide to revise it and fill in some of the earlier chapters, give me a shout - I think it could be worth it, to help balance out the story in these newer chapters. Cheers, LuxKen27
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 21:32 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, double damn, holy hand granade!!! Boy there is a problem Houston, and he's coming right at you. Hmmm......wonder how Sess is going to subdue a horny enraged youkai on a mission for a mate.
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 21:29 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! you did a very good job on it so far and I cant wait to read more. Please update soon :D
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 22:04 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love where you're taking this!! But after the last chappie, I think you need to raise your fic rating from Y to X. *fanning face with hands* Gawd, it's hot in here! Where's my fan?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 09:41 EDT
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hmm . . .Kagome and Inuyasha are going to be having some problems. But who the hell was that!? UGH! Anyways love the update, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 01:06 EDT
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Chapter 5 is great nice cliffy. can't wait till chapter 6.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 00:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story. I'm so wondering what happened in the past. Did Inu use the jewel to keep Miroku and Sango alive with him until Kagome's time. Did they keep her from falling down the well this time and she still has the jewel within her? Ahh...so much wondering...can't wait to find out! Looking forward to more! Thanks for sharing your story!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 03:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I look at the all bets are off line and think, yea he probably wants his belt off too... and I've barely read anything hentai-ish today...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 02:44 EDT
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the guys know but the girls don't. i am assuming that kagome is not a reincarnation (the whole i'm kikyo's inferior reincarnation bulls**t can't start over again please?). when did sango get there and did the guys live the whole 500? . . . i am also assuming you will explain it all sometime in the course of the story so don't worry about it. does naraku get the replay too, hope not? . . . i am intrigued and will look forward to more. ~ thank you, ginny
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Title: Great Job
Reviewed By: kittenprophetess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 22:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the twist in the story. Please continue!!! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 18:46 EDT
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I love chaper 2 and the intro. of Miroku. The party should be interesting. Will she meet Inuyasha?. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 03:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting plot concept...I look forward to reading more of this story!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 01:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 23:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice start...which it would've been longer though. Update soon! :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 20:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this story look good. Please update soon.
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