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| "Memories of you" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Title: Chapter 22
Reviewed By: LuxKen27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 16:21 EDT
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Absolutely beautiful :) For all your worries, you really did Sesshoumaru justice here, showing how and why he'd changed and was willing to hold out a hand to his brother after so many years. You filled the gaps nicely from the last draft I saw. And I still have to say how much I love this setting you've picked!! You're inspiring my muses, LOL. I look forward to more!
| Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 22:39 EDT
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interesting, i can honestly say, how inu yasha and sesshoumaru came to be together after so many years of fighting had never crossed my mind. but its an important aspect. im glad you included it...
| Title: Chapter 21
Reviewed By: LuxKen27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 14:13 EDT
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ARGH! You can't stop there, LOL ~ you are learning the art of dangerous cliffhangers all too well, my friend! :D What an excellent chapter. I love that everyone is starting to settle down and sort things out so that they have a cohesive plan to move forward. I'm curious about this intrigue with Sesshoumaru on the side, this 'minor business' to be taken care of...hmm, very shady! And, of course, the heating up of the Inu/Kag alone time - yum! I love that Sango named one of her daughters after her best friend, what a wonderful memorial. Also, yay for the hint of Kohaku/Rin! :) I looked at the pictures you included in your author's notes and that room is absolutely amazing!! I had something similar in mind for Memento Mori but I thought it was just something to dream up, not that it could be real!! You rawk, and so does this story. I look forward to the next chapter - and the rest of Inuyasha's past!!
| Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 00:10 EDT
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i was wondering when we would get to this part. i cant wait to hear more of inu yashas life bewteen kagomes... loved the chapter... cant wait for another update...
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 16:25 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the September 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2009 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2009art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction_March09/ ~ Inuyashloverr & KnittingKnots Owners of the Feudal Association
| Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 00:54 EDT
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Wow! This is excellent. It is so different from the usual. The only thing I see is that it really seems more like a divergence or a continuation than an AU to me. I usually avoid AU like the plague and I'm so glad I didn't. You took the canon and then twisted the ending before continuing in a completely canonish world. All the characters and what they did in the past are canon.
| Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 23:16 EDT
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I'm up to chapter 9 and am enjoying this a lot. I'll try to give you a better review later for figured that even a short review is better than none. I don't know what's going on yet, but I like the enemy who seems to have an unusual ability.
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 18:24 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Reviewed By: twinsnake1604 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 20:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ I officially love this one, I started reading earlier and I didnt wanna stop. I started to get to the bottom of chapter 19 and I saw that there was another chapter, when earlier there had only been 19 XD You have no idea how happy I was that there was another chapter that youd put up while I was still reading the rest of it.
| Title: Chapter 19
Reviewed By: LuxKen27 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 08:47 EST
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:D What a lovely surprise to wake up to! :) I see you've been bitten by the update bunnies just like I have, LOL. It was nice not having to wait to see how the final battle played out! I really felt for Kagome there at the end, knowing she would lose her memories of Inuyasha and yet struggling so valiantly to hold on to them til the last. It was nice to see that they declared their love for one other before she died, too - very touching :) So, where does she go from here? How will she react to remembering, to her friends now that she knows? I look forward to the rest of the journey!
| Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 21:44 EST
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honestly, some chapters are better than others... and though i thouroghly enjoy the inu yasha kagome sex sense, they seem a bit out of place. or maybe, they just go too far too fast ya know? but over all i like it... *officially saves story to favorite*
| Title: Chapter 18
Reviewed By: LuxKen27 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 09:39 EST
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AUGH! You're mean, giving us a mid-remembrance cliffhanger! :P Wow, this is awesome - its great to see Kagome finally accepting that she has to remember it all, accept that she lived it all, and that she has to do it alone. You're really amping up the tension here! The fear all of them felt before Kagome fell into her trance was palpable. If Yuji possessed her before, does he realize that she's "gone" and working on unlocking her powers? I was just a bit confused by that point - though it will probably be cleared up with another read of the entire story. After all, when they drink those herbs to go back in time, no one from the present knows what they are doing, right? Anyway - this is spectacular, and I do hope you'll get back to us soon with the rest of the final battle! I'm on pins and needles here!!
| Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 00:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story! I just hope for a happy ending.
| Reviewed By: LuxKen27 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 17:00 EST
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As they say - what a twist!! I definitely wasn't expecting that!! Wow, this is really getting nice and suspenseful - Kagome having to fight off the villain on her own, all while so upset and confused. Sesshoumaru's right, though - for all his good qualities, Inuyasha is absolutely single-minded when it comes to Kagome. I look forward to the next chapter! :)
| Reviewed By: dreamy7_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 21:40 EST
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Long Time no update :) glad to see anohter post cant wait for more
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